Okay, I have been thinking on this for a long. time. As in, two years. I've been thinking on this for two years.
I have an idea for a rock-focused dating sim, and I myself have an interest in pixel art. I've had this basis for the style, but I'm not 100% sure if it's visually appealing to others.
[img]file:///C:/Users/Tara/Pictures/Animashit/brunetteboypixel-export.png[/img]
[img]file:///C:/Users/Tara/Pictures/Animashit/frost.png[/img]
Any critique or advice is extremely welcome, as now that I have loads of time on my hands, I would love to get something done and share it with the community.
Looking For Critique On My Style
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Re: Looking For Critique On My Style
I like the style itself, I think it looks nice and I'd be interested in a game with this style. The character design is a bit boring, but that could easily be fixed by just putting him in a more interesting shirt with a graphic or pattern.
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Re: Looking For Critique On My Style
I agree with Zelan, the style itself is appealing and I would love to play with this kind of art, but the design needs tweaking. I would also do some work with the anatomy and perspective: for example the pose is on 3/4 angle, but the shirt is drawn like the character is facing forwards.
Good luck to your project, I hope to see this some day on the Completed Games -page
Good luck to your project, I hope to see this some day on the Completed Games -page
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Re: Looking For Critique On My Style
The art is good! And i'll advice to put more shading on those pixelized colors, depending on the angle of the shadow makes sense.
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