The VN features 3 different romance routes(Each with good end, neutral end, and lots of bad ends).
I am aiming to give the player as much control over the story as he would like, so there is a choice every 10 minutes(on average, of course).
I only recently discovered this forum, so I wanted to ask people about my introduction , and maybe you could it tell me how should I improve it.
If you liked it, feel free to ask me to post a small bit of the start of the story.
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(Picture-Black Screen) Lies shape reality. If it weren’t for lies, our reality would be a boring, linear story. Led by nothing but truth and random events, our lives wouldn’t be worth living. This is the story behind “predetermined fate” that god has created us. But we can fight it, we can deviate from the straight, boring road god built for us. Our weapons are lies. Lies shape the mind, mind shapes reality. Using lies, one creates reality for others. And themselves. It is not an exaggeration to say that the liar is in fact a semi-god. A fighter of true freedom. Lies possess great power, but even greater danger. Once you get caught in one’s lie, you are now in their reality. Where they are the absolute ruler. This is the story about the greatest lie, a lie that expanded beyond reality. But every lie, begins with a little bit of truth. … The kingdom of Alteria. A place of peace and prosperity. And the last resort of human kind. Once, humans had the freedom to go wherever they wanted, but now, beyond the borders of Alteria, a living hell awaits. (Picture-Demon king) The Demon King. A ruthless and vulgar beast, who ravaged the outside world, leaving only Alteria in one piece. It is his fault that the people of Alteria are living in a golden cage. No one can get out and no one can get in, if anyone survived the slaughter of the demon king. Yet, the question still remains: Why the demon king refuse to crush Alteria? Why does it stand alone in a sea of blood and ashes? But there is one thing the people of Alteria know, the demon king WILL attack. The great devil is known for having no mercy at all, as no soul managed to escape from his blood bath. And when he will, the kingdom will be set on fire. Thus, everyone is living in the shade of the demons. Not knowing when their fate shall be sealed. (Picture- Question mark hero) But not all hope is lost. The kingdom of Alteria still holds a secret weapon up its sleeve. The Hero of Fortune. After countless prayers and offerings made by the people of Alteria to the gods, a certain god offered her help. She blessed a small child, and designated him to be a great warrior, with enough power to defend the kingdom against the Great Demon. She gave the small child a sapphire ring, in order to signal him as her champion. However, there is one condition, at the age of 18, that child must eat the Holy Onion in order to achieve his true potential. Only then, will the Hero of Fortune must raise his sword against darkness, and restore the freedom and safety the people of Alteria once had. But one question still remains, who is that hero?