5-7-5 Syllable Haiku Requests

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Aurehan
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Re: 5-7-5 Syllable Haiku Requests

#16 Post by Aurehan » Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:28 pm

Rewritten Ennui wrote:I love a good excuse not to do my homework.
For Aurehan's Hikari:
Young master of threads
Between faux pas and focus
Can't dress herself right
>^< Ohhh.. I love it! Thank you very much!! X3
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Re: 5-7-5 Syllable Haiku Requests

#17 Post by TsukiShima » Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:16 pm

I wonder if I can do this xD
I'm here to request
A Haiku about Neo
I would be grateful
Description in my sig? :D

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#18 Post by Rewritten Ennui » Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:38 pm

*clap clap* You got the structure down. So for Neo...
A regular guy
But now fate stands before him
Become great, young man
I also wrote one for visual novels in general:
Mix prose, art, and sound
Chimera of many shapes
That is a VN
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Re: 5-7-5 Syllable Haiku Requests

#19 Post by CombatEye » Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:50 pm

Slightly off-topic but:

Haikus are quite great
Creating takes much effort
Exams made me so tired

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Re: 5-7-5 Syllable Haiku Requests

#20 Post by TsukiShima » Fri Dec 09, 2011 12:04 am

Oh, thank you so much! It's amazing how in 3 lines I can understand he's exact situation.

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