Anyways, I wanted opinions on my Story concept. So I don't go spending weeks learning scripting, doing all the art, doing the actual scripting to only get hate on it.
Welcome to Wonderland
The Story is a Wonderland theme. Alice following that white rabbit down the hole into Wonderland. Mystical worlds, ect ect.
This would start off looking like an inoccent wonderland story. The cute shy boy, sad past, falling in love. The cutesy amime style Im using would just add onto the trap. Though slowly it starts to become more twisted, as Alice's mental state changes as more and more things happen. Up to the point where he can't tell reality from wonderland. Which is quiet bad considering his Wonderland is quiet...messed up.
Alice is a 16 year old male who has had been living in an Orphanage for the past month. He has a bad case of Amnesia, and the only thing he can remember is his name, and that his parents are dead. During recent sessions with his therapist he continuously talks of "Blurred Visions of another world". He only see's them In his dream and He can never move about in this world. Its just like a picture showing and going.
His therapist gets quiet intrigued in this statement and tells Alice to find a way in, as this could be his ticket to finding his memories again. Of course Alice manages to gain access into this World only to be told by our favorite Cat that this is Wonderland.
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Pretty much his Therapist does a crap load of things to him causing most of his mental breaking. For Example "He's putting puzzle pieces from another puzzle into my puzzle. ." Also known as; Wrong Memories being reclaimed. There's also the fact that his Lucid dreams start to feel more and more real, to the point where he can claim he feels pain. He's way in the closet, he fell head over heels on another male. Only to find out the guys deaf and involed with his lost past.
The Character in this story related to Alice's wonderland in some way. Like for example.
Gilbert Is one of Alice's close friends. He tends to be quiet sarcastic and teasing, but is always there to help. At least when he can. In Alice's wonderland Gilbert is expressed as the Cheshire Cat. They look quiet the same excluding the Outfit and the cat features.
This pretty much goes for every character known in Wonderland. Plus some added by yours truly.
This story is going to be rather Gore-ific at some points. If i can figure out how, I might make it to where players can skip the extreme gore scene's.
Im all ready to start working on this project. I have the story pretty much set up. The rolalty-free, creative commons music for the soundtrack downloaded
[http://www.incompetech.com/ <--- This guy is amazing and his music is free, allowed to be used in anything including VN's, and allowed for commercial use. ]
Also some old drawings I did of a few characters. Note This is NOT the style Im going to be using. These were a tad bit old and I did them mostly for fun.
I would get more into it, but i don't want to spoil the heck out of it.
So yes opinions would be great.
Also if I ever did get this done; it would probably be split into parts. The story's far to big for one whole VN. It would be a playtime of like 3-5hours if i did that....
Also on a very small side note...does anyone want to add me on skype and help me out with scripting ;w;? The word tutorials hurt my head, and the game doesn't cover what I need to know. Though it help a ton with all the basics!
XUncleMartyz <-- my skype.