Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#31 Post by azureXtwilight » Fri Oct 05, 2012 10:59 am

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#32 Post by LVUER » Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:12 pm

There is one introductory scene of one character but I decided to scrap it away. In that scene, a girl introduce herself in front of (highschool classroom), talks about how she was already graduated from a famous Uni in US, and then says:

"I'm a genius, and you're all idiots"
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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#33 Post by mark_laverdiere » Mon Oct 08, 2012 8:25 pm

In real life relationships, pick-up lines are just too difficult to come up with, specially when you're with the one.

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#34 Post by redeyesblackpanda » Tue Oct 09, 2012 3:59 am

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#35 Post by Greeny » Tue Oct 09, 2012 1:17 pm

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#36 Post by lepapillonrouge » Wed Oct 10, 2012 3:06 am

mark_laverdiere wrote:In real life relationships, pick-up lines are just too difficult to come up with, specially when you're with the one.
That is adorable.

One-liners...uh

I've been working on black butterfly so

"Either you talk, or you don't. There's nothing I hate more than someone who doesn't know what they're trying to say. " - something hopefully I will remember to put in

"Shy girls are the easiest after all!" - this guy is trying to recruit the protag into a school club

"Takemin? Are we on a journey to catch them all?" - (Takemin is the above's character's nickname for the protagonist, Takeuchi Minami.)

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#37 Post by Greeny » Wed Oct 24, 2012 12:27 pm

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Re: Ideas for great one-liners (was: Lines Dump)

#38 Post by LeandroP » Wed Oct 24, 2012 7:00 pm

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