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I have a short story idea called "The Crying Rock". It's about a guitarist whose playing attracts the attention of a wandering god. It's basically fully fleshed out, if not properly written in a kinetic novel friendly format.
Which is the problem. The story requires a couple of POV switches at certain parts of the story. It's not more than 3 times...it's mainly to establish motivation of some of the divine characters. I've tried to play as many English Kinetic Novels as I can and for the most part they are 1st person. I have a couple of third person POV, but strangely enough I think they were stories where all the characters involved were in the same place for a majority of the story. So the transition between character perspectives was almost seamless.
To put it simply, how would you handle POV switching. I was thinking of doing the story in first person, but third person might make the switching easier to handle. If there are any demos/completed novels that are good examples that would be helpful too. If you're interested in knowing more about the story, I guess you can send me a private message and I'll let you know.
*hopes that makes sense*
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So as long as you give the reader a little indication to the switch, give each character their own distinct inner-voice, and don't jump around during a scene you should be fine. But if you feel that isn't enough, you could change the GUI or GUI colors.
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