Some friendly writing advice :)
Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:08 am
Hello, all. I am SelLi, nice to meet you again or for the first time.
I thought that I would try to share some friendly writing advice. A lot of this might sound basic, but I'd like to help you all write if I can, so I'm sharing anyway. This is all just from my personal experience.
I think that people get better at writing as they write, live their lives, and see other well done work that they like and find inspiring and interesting, whatever medium that is, but especially if that medium is also writing.
Something that I've found, and I know you may have heard this before as I know I have, is that you should try to write every day. Just kidding! Writing every day would be a good exercise, but realistically, you also just don't have the time to write some times. Things come up in life, and I get that. But as a general guide, it'd be good to make writing a part of your daily routine, even if you just write for 15 minutes or whatever. I've been doing this recently and I feel that it very much helps my flow of writing. If you don't do it EVERY day, the universe won't implode, but don't slack off.
For those of you who prefer to type their stories, I avoid complicated typing programs. I just use note pad. Other writing programs can be very distracting, specifically when they "help" you by underlining things, telling you that you made a spelling or a grammatical error. You will go back and do your editing later, but when you want to write, just write and don't worry about that stuff. It'll be sorted out later anyway, and if a program is constantly interrupting you, it interrupts your flow.
Another piece of advice I have is to have a loose structure of your events, not a tight structure. I find that when I have a tight structure, I treat it like a job, but when I have a loose structure, it is still structured but I have much more fun with it.
Flesh out the world that you want to create, and have key points of what's going to happen in your head and written down. Have an idea of how things are going to play out, but don't get into too many details.
Mr. Green is a murderer, and you already know that he's going to kill Mr. X. He'll probably be in the ballroom, but does it matter if he kills Mr. X with the candle stick at exactly quarter after 4 after very specific conditions are met? Or maybe you should just have "Green kills X at some point in the ballroom." somewhere in your notes for the story, and you can figure it out as you go.
When it comes to fleshing out your world and such, sometimes people- like myself- struggle with feelings of inadequacy. Somehow you might feel like your setting isn't that exciting, and will never be exciting, and that nothing is happening in your story. That feeling is crap. Instead of thinking so bleakly about your story, forget about it, go outside, and have a great day. Watch a movie you really love, and get reminded of how wonderful and magical life can be. (I also highly recommend praying.) Your setting/story/whatever does NOT have to be boring, similar to how life itself does not have to be boring. Thinking about it as boring is what will lead to it spiraling down into boredom, and you'll be glum and feel stuck and not know what to write. Your story can be exciting and alive, so remember that, and remind yourself of that when you might get down.
Another thing is to not to write to please people, and to not be proud. Sometimes, I get caught up watching some internet critic reviewing something or other and pointing out their opinions about it, and criticizing it. I find that those videos can bog me down- especially if the reviewer is focusing a lot on the negative. If someone is trying to help you by giving you constructive critique, consider what they say to you. They might teach you something great. However, in the end, it's not their project. Don't get mad at them, but don't worry about pleasing them or about "correcting your story" to fit their opinions. Also, the story should not be being made to puff up your ego. That's not why you started writing in the first place, and if it is, just don't do that. Don't puff up with pride. We should all write out of love, not for the sake of "proving" to anyone- including ourselves- how "great" we are. You love to write, right? So write out of love.
If you want to make a story, then do it, but don't rush to finish it. Even if you think you're done, look it over again and again. Wait a good long while, going over the story again and again. Will I change some things? Could this be done better? What am I trying do? Should I add more to it? What if I add this? Maybe I should change this character a little bit... oh if I do that, then this makes more sense, maybe i should tie these things together... and this character could have a father connected to someone else, or a friend I haven't mentioned...
The more time you spend writing the story, the more time you give it to grow into something greater than you even thought it would in the beginning. Trust me. Layers and layers of depth will come, and things will be refined the more you work at it.
I've been working on the same project for years and it's grown incredibly over its long time. I feel that it's more significant to take a long time making something great, than spend less time making something "meh".
But I understand that sometimes, like with nanoreno, time is of the essence and you can't pour a bunch of days/weeks/months/years into your project. Sometimes there are deadlines. However, perhaps what I said can still be taken into consideration in some way.
Think about your characters, write their backstories, write who and how you want them to be, and write scenes with them in it.
I've found that it helps to make a small sheet or two explaining the character. Who they are, where they come from, a little about their backstory -as I've said-, hobbies, their personalities, their tendencies, motivations for them, what role they're going to play in the story, and anything else you can think of that relates to them. (I personally find that printing out this sheet helps.) When you're writing, sometimes you might forget who your character is or how they might act, but thanks to your handy sheet, you can reference the sheet whenever your character's identity starts to feel muddied in your head.
Also, as I've said, write scenes about the characters. You may end up using those scenes in your finished story, but even if you don't, it will be a good exercise for you since it'll give you a feel for your character and how you write them.
Lastly, when I want to write, but don't feel like I'd be able to do it well because I'm in a bad mood or something, I bullet point what I'd like to happen next in the story. One of the best things about that is that, sometimes bullet pointing turns into actual scenes and lines of dialogue as you continue to write. That's good! You can use that. (That is how I find I start writing many of my scenes.)
Then later, you can just go back and fill out the scenes that are bullet points. Or if you look at it later, you can just remove or edit bullet points or scenes you've written. We don't know about your experimental writing stuff. It's not set in stone. Remove parts and edit as you see fit. It's your story.
Here's a little example of what I was saying about bullet pointing turning into scenes:
___
Edwardo is depressed.
Edwardo meets with Gagoosh.
Gagoosh talks with Edwardo about her childhood.
Gagoosh used to grow up in these parts for years.
She's been to the mall and the park, and to many different places with their friends before.
She never really thought about it, but thinking back, she has a lot of good memories.
One time, she remembers her brother getting his kite stuck in the tree in their back yard.
She giggled as she continued to talk to Edwardo about it, and he looked at her with intrigue.
"Do you have any childhood memories, Edwardo?"
___
Post-lastly lastly: Editing is very important. When you feel you're done writing something, look it over again several times and correct mistakes, even if you don't think you'll find anything. Then, in a day or two -or in a few hours- maybe come back to it and do the same thing. I've found many mistakes this way and I think it'll help you, too.
Thanks for sticking with me though all of that. I know that a lot of this might be common sense to a lot of people, but still, I hope I helped a little bit. I just thought I'd share what I've learned.
Good and happy writing, you guys. Don't sweat the small things.
If you put the important things in first, the little things will come later.
I thought that I would try to share some friendly writing advice. A lot of this might sound basic, but I'd like to help you all write if I can, so I'm sharing anyway. This is all just from my personal experience.
I think that people get better at writing as they write, live their lives, and see other well done work that they like and find inspiring and interesting, whatever medium that is, but especially if that medium is also writing.
Something that I've found, and I know you may have heard this before as I know I have, is that you should try to write every day. Just kidding! Writing every day would be a good exercise, but realistically, you also just don't have the time to write some times. Things come up in life, and I get that. But as a general guide, it'd be good to make writing a part of your daily routine, even if you just write for 15 minutes or whatever. I've been doing this recently and I feel that it very much helps my flow of writing. If you don't do it EVERY day, the universe won't implode, but don't slack off.
For those of you who prefer to type their stories, I avoid complicated typing programs. I just use note pad. Other writing programs can be very distracting, specifically when they "help" you by underlining things, telling you that you made a spelling or a grammatical error. You will go back and do your editing later, but when you want to write, just write and don't worry about that stuff. It'll be sorted out later anyway, and if a program is constantly interrupting you, it interrupts your flow.
Another piece of advice I have is to have a loose structure of your events, not a tight structure. I find that when I have a tight structure, I treat it like a job, but when I have a loose structure, it is still structured but I have much more fun with it.
Flesh out the world that you want to create, and have key points of what's going to happen in your head and written down. Have an idea of how things are going to play out, but don't get into too many details.
Mr. Green is a murderer, and you already know that he's going to kill Mr. X. He'll probably be in the ballroom, but does it matter if he kills Mr. X with the candle stick at exactly quarter after 4 after very specific conditions are met? Or maybe you should just have "Green kills X at some point in the ballroom." somewhere in your notes for the story, and you can figure it out as you go.
When it comes to fleshing out your world and such, sometimes people- like myself- struggle with feelings of inadequacy. Somehow you might feel like your setting isn't that exciting, and will never be exciting, and that nothing is happening in your story. That feeling is crap. Instead of thinking so bleakly about your story, forget about it, go outside, and have a great day. Watch a movie you really love, and get reminded of how wonderful and magical life can be. (I also highly recommend praying.) Your setting/story/whatever does NOT have to be boring, similar to how life itself does not have to be boring. Thinking about it as boring is what will lead to it spiraling down into boredom, and you'll be glum and feel stuck and not know what to write. Your story can be exciting and alive, so remember that, and remind yourself of that when you might get down.
Another thing is to not to write to please people, and to not be proud. Sometimes, I get caught up watching some internet critic reviewing something or other and pointing out their opinions about it, and criticizing it. I find that those videos can bog me down- especially if the reviewer is focusing a lot on the negative. If someone is trying to help you by giving you constructive critique, consider what they say to you. They might teach you something great. However, in the end, it's not their project. Don't get mad at them, but don't worry about pleasing them or about "correcting your story" to fit their opinions. Also, the story should not be being made to puff up your ego. That's not why you started writing in the first place, and if it is, just don't do that. Don't puff up with pride. We should all write out of love, not for the sake of "proving" to anyone- including ourselves- how "great" we are. You love to write, right? So write out of love.
If you want to make a story, then do it, but don't rush to finish it. Even if you think you're done, look it over again and again. Wait a good long while, going over the story again and again. Will I change some things? Could this be done better? What am I trying do? Should I add more to it? What if I add this? Maybe I should change this character a little bit... oh if I do that, then this makes more sense, maybe i should tie these things together... and this character could have a father connected to someone else, or a friend I haven't mentioned...
The more time you spend writing the story, the more time you give it to grow into something greater than you even thought it would in the beginning. Trust me. Layers and layers of depth will come, and things will be refined the more you work at it.
I've been working on the same project for years and it's grown incredibly over its long time. I feel that it's more significant to take a long time making something great, than spend less time making something "meh".
But I understand that sometimes, like with nanoreno, time is of the essence and you can't pour a bunch of days/weeks/months/years into your project. Sometimes there are deadlines. However, perhaps what I said can still be taken into consideration in some way.
Think about your characters, write their backstories, write who and how you want them to be, and write scenes with them in it.
I've found that it helps to make a small sheet or two explaining the character. Who they are, where they come from, a little about their backstory -as I've said-, hobbies, their personalities, their tendencies, motivations for them, what role they're going to play in the story, and anything else you can think of that relates to them. (I personally find that printing out this sheet helps.) When you're writing, sometimes you might forget who your character is or how they might act, but thanks to your handy sheet, you can reference the sheet whenever your character's identity starts to feel muddied in your head.
Also, as I've said, write scenes about the characters. You may end up using those scenes in your finished story, but even if you don't, it will be a good exercise for you since it'll give you a feel for your character and how you write them.
Lastly, when I want to write, but don't feel like I'd be able to do it well because I'm in a bad mood or something, I bullet point what I'd like to happen next in the story. One of the best things about that is that, sometimes bullet pointing turns into actual scenes and lines of dialogue as you continue to write. That's good! You can use that. (That is how I find I start writing many of my scenes.)
Then later, you can just go back and fill out the scenes that are bullet points. Or if you look at it later, you can just remove or edit bullet points or scenes you've written. We don't know about your experimental writing stuff. It's not set in stone. Remove parts and edit as you see fit. It's your story.
Here's a little example of what I was saying about bullet pointing turning into scenes:
___
Edwardo is depressed.
Edwardo meets with Gagoosh.
Gagoosh talks with Edwardo about her childhood.
Gagoosh used to grow up in these parts for years.
She's been to the mall and the park, and to many different places with their friends before.
She never really thought about it, but thinking back, she has a lot of good memories.
One time, she remembers her brother getting his kite stuck in the tree in their back yard.
She giggled as she continued to talk to Edwardo about it, and he looked at her with intrigue.
"Do you have any childhood memories, Edwardo?"
___
Post-lastly lastly: Editing is very important. When you feel you're done writing something, look it over again several times and correct mistakes, even if you don't think you'll find anything. Then, in a day or two -or in a few hours- maybe come back to it and do the same thing. I've found many mistakes this way and I think it'll help you, too.
Thanks for sticking with me though all of that. I know that a lot of this might be common sense to a lot of people, but still, I hope I helped a little bit. I just thought I'd share what I've learned.
Good and happy writing, you guys. Don't sweat the small things.
If you put the important things in first, the little things will come later.