General plot advice and input
Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:48 pm
Hello there. I'm new, pleased to meet you, this place looks great.
Anyway.
I'm looking for opinions, input, helpful guidance and harsh critiques. I'm not asking for project help in terms of development such as coding, art, etc, at this stage, but if you do wish to put your name down to help out later I would appreciate it. However, that is not my current goal.
General synopsis is here: (250 words)
http://pastebin.com/FhPLGc1M
Main character bio: (200 words)
http://pastebin.com/pcEJb379
Major character bios: (2000 words)
http://pastebin.com/DNTCiesZ
Minor character bios: (1000 words)
http://pastebin.com/7drag152
Please feel free to rummage through the links and give some tips, opinions, ask questions, etc.
Anyway.
I'm looking for opinions, input, helpful guidance and harsh critiques. I'm not asking for project help in terms of development such as coding, art, etc, at this stage, but if you do wish to put your name down to help out later I would appreciate it. However, that is not my current goal.
General synopsis is here: (250 words)
http://pastebin.com/FhPLGc1M
Main character bio: (200 words)
http://pastebin.com/pcEJb379
Major character bios: (2000 words)
http://pastebin.com/DNTCiesZ
Minor character bios: (1000 words)
http://pastebin.com/7drag152
Please feel free to rummage through the links and give some tips, opinions, ask questions, etc.