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General plot advice and input

Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2014 6:48 pm
by Avalanche
Hello there. I'm new, pleased to meet you, this place looks great.


I'm looking for opinions, input, helpful guidance and harsh critiques. I'm not asking for project help in terms of development such as coding, art, etc, at this stage, but if you do wish to put your name down to help out later I would appreciate it. However, that is not my current goal.

General synopsis is here: (250 words)

Main character bio: (200 words)

Major character bios: (2000 words)

Minor character bios: (1000 words)

Please feel free to rummage through the links and give some tips, opinions, ask questions, etc.

Re: General plot advice and input

Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:45 am
by DNAniel213
The plot is really interesting. No one can really do much critics right now, given that you've only given the synopsis and the character bios(which I think are great too.) Rather, asking for "General plot advice and input" is too blunt for pinpoint critics. Wait..

Here's a post from SelLi. It should give you some ideas for your growing plot. ... 47&t=26881

Oh, and if you're looking for a small writing circle(This isn't an excuse for having very few members=_=) you can join ours.
It's on google drive, and our numbers are still growing.

Re: General plot advice and input

Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:50 am
by Avalanche
Thanks for the reply. I know that what I posted in the links isn't very much to critique right now, but I felt that if I threw up what I had right now, I'd get more input than if I'd posted 10,000 words with twenty bios, hoping people would read them.

This way, I can add to the thread piece by piece, instead of dumping it all in a wall of text.
I'm hoping to start writing something today, or sometime soon.

I'd be very interested in joining your writing circle, or at least having a look at it.

Re: General plot advice and input

Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 9:32 pm
by DNAniel213
Pm me your google adress x) I'll add you to our google drive writing circle