Exactly, and I read the post in about 1-2 minutes. So a game that takes 3-5 hours to play (and I think 100.000 words actually takes a bit longer still), that's a whole lot of hours even without rewrites and wondering what to write. And the music, wow. I already took way longer than most with choosing all the music in my game, but to have about 80 songs made yourself... You must either love to make music or have some real neurotic dedication.Sonomi wrote:Fun fact: I've already composed 80+ tracks over the past 5 months in preparation for this VN. 40 of which did make it to the music folder, and I anticipate removing most of what remains. Taking into account the fact that it usually takes me somewhere between 12 and 18 hours to compose one song, I can't begin to count the hours I've already directed toward this project of mine. I'm not a fantastic composer, so I took the iterative approach to improving my abilities even a little. Though I've wasted so many hours on songs that I'll never use in the hopes of salvaging something of the lot, I'm almost happy with about 3 of them.
So long story short, I certainly understand your words on time. More than anything (this post took approx. 1.2 hours to write).
I don't really know my composing and my range of adapting music begins and ends with cutting off empty seconds from the beginning and ending, so ignore my idea if it's stupid, but what if you would combine some of the songs? There ought to be sudden parts that are good in songs that are not so great over average, as long as you haven't released them you can always toss them together into fewer but better songs. I personally like a song with multiple good elements to them over a song that relies on one good element, even if the singular element is better.
And if you don't use the songs yourself, you could start a Creative Commons thread for them or upload them to a site like Freemusicarchive so others might use them. Find those poor orphan songs a new home.
I'm about to get reaaallly preachy about May Sues, so feel free to skip to the bottom line if you don't want that.Not at all. What is this method that you speak of? I don't think I've heard of it before, but if I interpret your words correctly it may be another good rule of thumb for me. I take it that you mean if a character does not cause some sort of conflict in the story, then he or she is in danger of being categorized as a "Mary Sue"? A synonym for flaw is "shortcoming", so it would have to cause a struggle somewhere down the line if it truly is a weakness of the character in question. Otherwise, if no one is affected by it, then it would not be viewed as a flaw at all. That is my interpretation, though I could easily be wrong about this.
I'm very early in the works of character development. I feel it's at that point where you know how your characters would behave and react in a given situation but you're now working out the "whys" behind each of their traits to round them out.
I don't know about the technique he mentioned, but you should always wonder with a character whether they can, should and deserve to do something. A Mary Sue is not someone without flaw or who does everything amazingly. While these are the most associated with Mary Sue, more importantly is whether the readers feel like he/she should(n't) be this 'amazing'
Can: You made a character and gave them certain powers. If it's a Mary Sue, they probably have a rediculous power that's way too overpowered or convenient. Doesn't mean it'll be a bad character if they're too powerful (One Punch!!!!), but it probably will in most circumstances. Although being campy seems to be a good way to solve it, or make sure that the character isn't used every time to resolve a conflict at the last minute like some Ex Machina.
Should: Even if the power is strictly speaking at the same level as others, one that works too perfectly in every situation or which seems to work/get a boost whenever it has to, will feel just as OP. If the story seems to bend the powers of the opponent or the circumstances to allow the mary Sue to win, it will also still be an OP power.
Deserve: But most importantly, Your character has a certain power, does it deserve to work? Part of the story's appeal is that the conflict actually feels real, if Mary Sue's power works to solve this problem even though the reader feels it shouldn't or that it's rather obvious that the power will work, this conflict is nonexistent and any attempt by the writer to convey it will seem pitiful. Victory is something the protagonist needs to work for, if they don't deserve it the reader won't be pleased.
A second way to determine whether a character is Mary Sue is the Mary Sue triangle. I tend to use three well-known (and for some reason liked) characters to explain the three corner stones of this triangle: Superman, Batman and Jotaru Joestar. While these three are actually really popular, they would normally be disliked for being Mary Sue. Always try to see if your character bears some resemblance with these guys.
Superman: Too OP, his powers are actually unlimited, so any conflict seems pointless. See the Can argument.
Batman: Just because the character has flaws, doesn't mean they're not Mary Sue. An anti-Sue, who is 'amazing' despite having obvious flaws can be even more annoying than a regular Mary Sue. Batman is a grumpy man who refuses to take orders but commands pretty much everyone, works alone but always puts his nose into other people's bussiness, keeps his problems to himself but refuses others this right, and seems to know and be able of anything despite being being a mortal man amongst godlike beings. And yet the other characters keep praising and respecting him, that's Anti-Sue.
Jotaru Joestar (and friends) is a guy who seems to be on the writer's moral good side regardless of his actions and the rest of the world is twisted to ensure this. Any side character looks despicable and arrogantly moronic to ensure you'll enjoy Jojo being a jerk to them, all the enemies are either hideously misformed, or pretty but arrogant cowards, and all the women seem to love him regardless of his behaviour. Even if the character themselves is normal or realistic, if the rest of the world is warped to make them look better, it can still be a Mary Sue.
The best way to solve a Mary Sue is to either spread out the awesomeness over the entire character cast, add an antagonist whose actually awesome as well or just to be sure to keep all the other characters respectable as well.
Bottomline, ignore everything I just said. The best way to see if your character is Mary Sue, is to have someone proofread your script and try not to create a wish-fulfillment character writing your story.