Critique Needed

[TennisHero]

I finished writing the second part of my visual novel. I was wondering if someone could play it and give me a review. The game includes Parts 1-2.

WHAT I WANT TO KNOW
"Which scenes stood out to you the most?"
"Which scenes could be improved or expanded upon?"
"Any ideas you’d have to make this story more interesting?"
"Any predictions about what's to come in Part 3?"
"Was Part 2 an overall improvement of Part 1?"

For more information, read the description in the link below.
http://tennishero.deviantart.com/art/Lu ... -654005938

Link to Game
http://www.mediafire.com/file/abnic7q66 ... .0-all.zip