Sharing my work

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Sharing my work

#1 Post by Westeford » Fri May 11, 2018 12:17 am

I started looking over some of my older writing. (October 2017) Back then I wanted to write some kind of multi-path college-based dating sim with a very rich story. My main inspirations at the time were Higurashi and Metal Gear Solid. I stopped working on it due to losing passion for it and wanting to apply myself to something "simpler" and smaller to start with. That project I've been working on for 5 months now, and it's nearing completion. (I think).
But I remember this chapter the fondest. This was written as one of the endings. I felt compelled to share it. (The other endings I wrote just got sillier and less interesting, the second ending involved a girl making a gundam in the school basement.)
There are references to certain plot threads in this chapter, but I don't think much context is needed. (I barely remember half of the context anyway.) The most you need to know is that Bryce can see brief visions of the future and the chapter begins when a terrorist attack begins on a small island country.
It's kind of graphic so read at your own risk.
Chapter5a, Katrina.docx
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I'd love to hear what you guys think. Should I try salvaging this project? What kind of things did I do right and wrong? That kind of stuff.

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