Fast pace stories or drawn out stories?

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Fast pace stories or drawn out stories?

#1 Post by beastcarving » Sun May 19, 2019 2:46 am

I like how fast pace Episode is, but I love how story-rich other VNs can be. Let's talk!
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Re: Fast pace stories or drawn out stories?

#2 Post by verysunshine » Thu Aug 15, 2019 12:05 pm

Episode is designed for mobile. Standard VNs are designed for consoles or PCs. They have different expectations.

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Re: Fast pace stories or drawn out stories?

#3 Post by Elsa Kisiel » Sun Aug 18, 2019 6:50 am

I don't really know Episode (I play on computer), but I do prefer short stories, as I usually play VNs in the train. (I like being able to start and finish a new game in one trajet, or in one week-end.) Now, there's still exception, and I do like so very long and rich stories. But with longer stories, there's the risk I play a little, then doesn't play for a few week, then, when I start playing again, I forget a lot of things about what happened before. (And also, there's more risk I will grow bored of a game if it's long; I don't have the time to grow bored with shorter games)
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#4 Post by Maromar » Thu Aug 22, 2019 2:33 am

As you've mentioned before, both platforms have their merits, and neither are safe from me devouring them. The only thing that'll really keep me away is poor writing.
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Re: Fast pace stories or drawn out stories?

#5 Post by Autumnotopia » Tue Sep 03, 2019 2:19 am

This is probably obvious, but for me a lot of it is in quality. If it's Not Good, then I prefer it to just be over sooner... But those really great stories that go on for ages are some of my favorites. I remember after I finished playing Umineko (over the course of a few months) I just sat there thinking 'what now?', I like that really ambitious slow burn stories leave a gap when they're over.

So I guess: slow and good > quick and good > quick and bad > slow and bad (though even my completionist brain tends to give up on those before they're over haha)

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