plot test, what do you think?

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plot test, what do you think?

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Hello! I'm Alexandro and I'm a new writer.
I wrote this plot by my own but I'm not native english, and i think the plot make sense... :?
Anybody can help me?
(Science fiction)
Eternum plot:

An odyssey through the Andromeda galaxy. Mark Sanchez, the first man to set foot in another reality, between post-war camps, a crew of rebel aliens and a corrupt system ... will he have time to wonder?

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