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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#31 Post by LVUER » Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:33 pm

Oh no, how she could be so cute >_< Now you, Deji, makes me can't focus on my job today because of her cuteness...
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#32 Post by sake-bento » Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:30 am

Morishita wrote:I'm a little nervous to give my thoughts but I think the logo looks just a touch dark and I only say that because since the story is about such vibrant characters maybe if the logo had brighter colors that would help show that the story is a bright story but I may be totally wrong on this and this is just a little thought of mine O.O, If you don't want brighter colors maybe having the colors match each girls hair or eye color like a color link also comes to mind but then again I may be totally wrong and it's okay if you hate my idea's I just wanted to give my input, Logo design can be a pain sometimes but I think it's a lot of fun :D Also I really like the faint outline inside the words, maybe you could have a swan outline inside the words instead of the leaf type of outline you have *forgive me if it's not a leaf outline I can't see it that well O.O;*
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#33 Post by Morishita » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:52 am

You're welcome, I'll keep trying to give what little input I have when you post up another update!

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#34 Post by sake-bento » Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:52 pm

Word count update: 45

Yeah, word updates aren't as cool as pictures, huh? : ( It's also a very misleading number, since there are a lot of words in it. Just not in a countable place. I just wanted to let everyone know I'm actually doing something. >.>;;

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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#35 Post by Asterisk » Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:24 am

The girls are so SO CUTE!!!
I can't to see more!!
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#36 Post by Deji » Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:04 pm

One more sprite down C:
I've been slow >>;
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#37 Post by Aurehan » Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:37 pm

Oooh! The sprites are coming out so pretty! <3
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#38 Post by sciencewarrior » Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:54 pm

OMG Deji, put those girls inside spoiler tags, they are totally Not Safe For The Heart!

Really, I'm so paying a visit to my cardiologist before downloading this game. And with a title like Swan SongMelody, I can only expect some serious heartstring pulling.
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#39 Post by Deji » Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:04 pm

I'm so glad you like the girls so far, guys! >w<

I wish I could work on this all day ;_; But work comes first *sobs*

I'll get Astrid done soon!
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#40 Post by sake-bento » Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:37 pm

I feel so guilty shirking other VNs to work on this, but it'll be free, so I don't feel TOO bad. >_> And it's fuuuun. Deji and I have such a complementary style, especially when it comes to cute things.

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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#41 Post by Blane Doyle » Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:55 pm

These girls look adorable! And so long as you are happy and working hard I don't think there is any reason to feel guilty!

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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#42 Post by Subaru » Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:48 am

Deji-san, I think I've fallen in love with your art :D

I wanna play this as soon as possible >_< I just know it'll be good for the heart and soul
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#43 Post by Princess Akina » Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:26 am

Ohmygod stalking this.
This. Is. So. Adorable. Squeal 8D
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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#44 Post by sake-bento » Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:01 pm

Spoiler (Not a spoiler): Currently working on a scene where they all learn to bake cupcakes. Because it's not a sake-bento game without some mention of food somewhere.

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Re: Swan's Melody [2012]

#45 Post by Blane Doyle » Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:49 pm

Any mention of food = Yes please. XD

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