Page 3 of 4
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:33 pm
by LVUER
Oh no, how she could be so cute >_< Now you, Deji, makes me can't focus on my job today because of her cuteness...
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 12:30 am
by sake-bento
Morishita wrote:I'm a little nervous to give my thoughts but I think the logo looks just a touch dark and I only say that because since the story is about such vibrant characters maybe if the logo had brighter colors that would help show that the story is a bright story but I may be totally wrong on this and this is just a little thought of mine O.O, If you don't want brighter colors maybe having the colors match each girls hair or eye color like a color link also comes to mind but then again I may be totally wrong and it's okay if you hate my idea's I just wanted to give my input, Logo design can be a pain sometimes but I think it's a lot of fun
Also I really like the faint outline inside the words, maybe you could have a swan outline inside the words instead of the leaf type of outline you have *forgive me if it's not a leaf outline I can't see it that well O.O;*
Ara~ please don't be nervous. We made this thread specifically because we would like people's thoughts. Thank you for your feedback. ^-^
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:52 am
by Morishita
You're welcome, I'll keep trying to give what little input I have when you post up another update!
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:52 pm
by sake-bento
Word count update: 45
Yeah, word updates aren't as cool as pictures, huh? : ( It's also a very misleading number, since there are a lot of words in it. Just not in a countable place. I just wanted to let everyone know I'm actually doing something. >.>;;
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:24 am
by Asterisk
The girls are so SO CUTE!!!
I can't to see more!!
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:04 pm
by Deji
One more sprite down C:
I've been slow >>;
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:37 pm
by Aurehan
Oooh! The sprites are coming out so pretty! <3
Can't wait for this ><
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:54 pm
by sciencewarrior
OMG Deji, put those girls inside spoiler tags, they are totally Not Safe For The Heart!
Really, I'm so paying a visit to my cardiologist before downloading this game. And with a title like Swan SongMelody, I can only expect some serious heartstring pulling.
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:04 pm
by Deji
I'm so glad you like the girls so far, guys! >w<
I wish I could work on this all day ;_; But work comes first *sobs*
I'll get Astrid done soon!
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:37 pm
by sake-bento
I feel so guilty shirking other VNs to work on this, but it'll be free, so I don't feel TOO bad. >_> And it's fuuuun. Deji and I have such a complementary style, especially when it comes to cute things.
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2012 11:55 pm
by Blane Doyle
These girls look adorable! And so long as you are happy and working hard I don't think there is any reason to feel guilty!
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2012 9:48 am
by Subaru
Deji-san, I think I've fallen in love with your art
I wanna play this as soon as possible >_< I just know it'll be good for the heart and soul
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:26 am
by Princess Akina
Ohmygod stalking this.
This. Is. So. Adorable. Squeal 8D
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:01 pm
by sake-bento
Spoiler (Not a spoiler): Currently working on a scene where they all learn to bake cupcakes. Because it's not a sake-bento game without some mention of food somewhere.
Re: Swan's Melody [2012]
Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2012 5:49 pm
by Blane Doyle
Any mention of food = Yes please. XD
Any mention of progress is even more so!