Black Feathers [2012]

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Black Feathers [2012]

#1 Post by Pyonkotchi » Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:18 am

kajdhakd been wanting to do a NaNORenO forever. lets see if I can do this
This story is set in the same universe as my project Memory;Eternity (kind of a prequel but not.)
it's a short story with multiple endings

Story:
Wings. Wings are the symbol of an Aeronian. without wings you might as well not even bother calling yourself an Aeronian.
Their growth marks the most special day of an Aeronians life, and Cassandra Winlan, Princess of Aeronia, has finally gotten hers. The only problem is they are black. and only demons grow black wings

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Cassandra Winlan
Age 17
Race Aeronian/Vulpin (Demon/Vulpin)
since she's a hybrid race, her wings grew in much later. when it was discovered she was part demon, she became a target of hate, because demons are said to bring despair and misfortune to others.
her most unattractive quality is her bad temper but she has a strong sense of justice.

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Nicholas Lightwing
age 19
race: elf
a boy Cassandra meats later on. he's a very friendly boy and very playful. he joins Cass because he was bored and quickly took a liking to her. he's really a really nice guy and unlike Cassandra, he's very patient and refrains from fighting
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#2 Post by Asterisk » Sun Mar 04, 2012 2:25 am

Nice art!!!

Good luck! You can do it~~~ it'll be fun and keep the progress comin!
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#3 Post by GeneDNC » Tue Mar 06, 2012 9:56 am

This project needs more replies. ^__^ Even if they are short ones to say that the art is positively lovely and the story seems intriguing. I am looking forward to hearing more about the characters and their world. Good luck finishing!

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#4 Post by SusanTheCat » Tue Mar 06, 2012 1:00 pm

Definitely need more replies.

Cassandra is adorable.

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#5 Post by clua » Tue Mar 06, 2012 1:16 pm

XD Cute concepts! Good luck with your project, you can do it!
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#6 Post by Anna » Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:46 pm

*joining the bandwagon*

I can't stop staring at Nicholas' fluffy hair :D!

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#7 Post by awesomeautumn » Tue Mar 06, 2012 4:14 pm

I love her freckles!
The art is very pretty~
This game looks like it'll be interesting, and I'm eager to see how it turns out :)

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#8 Post by Princess Akina » Tue Mar 13, 2012 6:11 am

Anna wrote:*joining the bandwagon*

I can't stop staring at Nicholas' fluffy hair :D!
I second that xD
Definitely watching this thread 8D
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#9 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:13 am

I really like your drawing style, it so unique and pleasing. Espeically the way you draw noses and lips and hair and... okay I'll stop now >_> I really like fiesty female leads though, they always make things interesting. It's also an interesting premise that it's a princess that becomes the social outcase. Good luck :)

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