Spiral Destiny [crisis survival VN] [NaNoRenO 2012]

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#31 Post by Nellie »

@ShadowBerry - I might have taken the sketch from Gamelicious! Who knows xD
Glad you like it though! =D Was a bit worried it won't appeal to those who're interested in Gamelicious! as this is of a totally different genre (non-otome... well, not pure otome; no romance; no hot guys... sorta... sorry Soe xD; more actions orientated and more drama), but I'm glad to see you interested still xD

@GeneDNC - D= I confess... I have no idea how to code a CG gallery/jukebox... I need to ask Esther if that's something she'll be able to do T_T

Thanks for your input! I've decided to take in clua's advice and make a new logo based on her sketch =3 I hope I won't disappoint her after all her kind feedbacks! xD


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Anyone interested to co-write? XD Especially the lyrics for the theme song
I'd like to welcome Nightydreams to the team :)
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#32 Post by Nellie »

Feel bad for double posting all the time >_<

But here's the final (non-spoiler, uncoloured) sprite update! :)
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Btw, after some discussion with Nightydreams and a few of my Indonesian friends, we decided to change his name to Satria :)
For those who doesn't know, it means 'knight, warrior'. A fitting name ;)
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#33 Post by Nightydreams »

Yes more sprites! Brilliant!
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#34 Post by Blane Doyle »

Oooh I am loving these sprites and progress! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK 83

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#35 Post by Nellie »

First coloured sprite! *Poof*
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#36 Post by Blane Doyle »

OH WOW THIS LOOKS GREAT! I was expecting something great but this far exceeded my expectations!

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#37 Post by Nellie »

Thanks!! :)

I was getting a lot of feedbacks on how Eun looks really fat >_<

Anyway, comments on the GUI please? XD I was kinda considering changing it to 'Settings'. Well I know it's just something really minor, but it's kinda bothering me =/

Ah, I failed to mention earlier, but the images are just placeholders to test the opacity etc xD
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I'm also considering a time/clock GUI on the normal screen, since it's alternating between two POVs, and sometimes the story goes back a few mins... Any comments on that?
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#38 Post by sciencewarrior »

Nellie wrote:I was getting a lot of feedbacks on how Eun looks really fat >_<
Nonsense. She looks gorgeous.
Nellie wrote:Anyway, comments on the GUI please? XD I was kinda considering changing it to 'Settings'. Well I know it's just something really minor, but it's kinda bothering me =/
"Options", "Preferences", "Settings", it really doesn't make any difference. Players will understand what it means anyway. But if it bothers you, by all means, change it.
My only criticism is that the save/load screen doesn't look all that functional. Will you have only two pages, for a total of eight save slots, or will you have multiple pages? I can't tell from the screenshot. Some kind of indication is necessary. And if you have multiple pages, definitely include first/last buttons.
Nellie wrote:I'm also considering a time/clock GUI on the normal screen, since it's alternating between two POVs, and sometimes the story goes back a few mins... Any comments on that?
Good idea. Just remember to update it in appropriate intervals.
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#39 Post by Mink »

Nellie wrote:Thanks!! :)

I was getting a lot of feedbacks on how Eun looks really fat >_<
This gif is for you. I've been looking for a reason to use it.

I should probably be more on-topic. Uh...I don't really have much to say other than, yeah, I'll play this, and I think everything looks very polished. Hopefully I won't have flashbacks to that time I was trapped by/because of a hurricane.
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#40 Post by Nightydreams »

Nellie wrote:I was getting a lot of feedbacks on how Eun looks really fat >_<
Who all these bitches all up in Eun business calling her fat when she's gorgeous!

Well, I disagree, V.V
I believe that a man should not go back on his decisions,
But here I am deciding to break that one rule of manliness.
Because I would rather be thought less of as a man,
Then be lost as a person.

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#41 Post by Anna »

Nellie wrote:I was getting a lot of feedbacks on how Eun looks really fat >_<
What the hell, don't they know that most women with a cup-size like that also have HIPS? And she doesn't even look fat really.

Also, I love the colours of your GUI! Very warm and shiny.

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#42 Post by Nellie »

@sciencewarrior - Thanks for the input - will be modifying the save/load scene! :)

@Mink - Lol, nice gif. Although the ones telling me that are my boy, my sister and the other oriental girls who if their waist exceed 23 inches they think they are obese =/ (Screw the ppl around me. I like a bit of meat to a girl =P) Really glad you'll want to play this! :)

@Nightydreams - Yay =D

@Anna - Heh, probably cause oriental girls are all stick thin =P I'm a UK size 10 and been called obese many times =/
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Second coloured sprite! I am tempted to make her bra or n*ppl*s show when the clothes are wet. Anyone think it's too much? :mrgreen:
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#43 Post by Blane Doyle »

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I like these updates. 83

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#44 Post by GeneDNC »

I really like the extras screen, it looks very sleek and polished, like someone before me mentioned.

For the clock UI, even though it's probably obvious when the POV changes, but maybe make the clocks two different colours or shades to highlight that you are now in another person's timeframe.

Also I agree with all the sentiment about Eun NOT being fat and that the sprites are positively lovely.

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#45 Post by Nellie »

Screenshot test :mrgreen:
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