Spiral Destiny [crisis survival VN] [NaNoRenO 2012]

[Blane Doyle]

THIS SCREENSHOT LOOKS GREAT 8D

I may be me, and this is awkward to point out, but the woman on the right... her shirt and breast line up looks funny. ^^;

[Nellie]

@Bane Reiko - Could you explain a bit especially which part looks weird? Don't worry - I appreciate all feedbacks to make this as ideal as possible (for a month's project, that is =P)


Ratana's sprite~~

Satria =D

Annnnnnnd.... Sprites all done!! GUI all done! BG pre-tsunami attacks all done. CGs... doesn't matter, will do-able with the current ones. More will be better, but it's decent now =P

Script... hides away and continue writing

[Nightydreams]

Script is good, we'll be done in no time at our pace ^.^

Writing as if his life depended on it, which it does now that he thinks about it

[Blane Doyle]

The way her breasts and the shirt are positioned makes it look like the shirt is pulled to the right. But the shirt... doesn't look like it is when I look at it so it looks like her breasts are askew. (Though this is just me and I am picky and it looks fine overall)

These sprites, however, look PERFECT. 83

[Nellie]

@Bane Reiko - I still kinda couldn't get it ^_^;; If you mean those lines, it's actually stretch effects cause her boobs are kinda big... But hmmmmm... I'll have a closer look >_<

Writing as if his life depended on it, which it does now that he thinks about it

Wait what? His...? Silly question... But... You're a GUY? I've been talking to you all these time assuming you're a girl... ... ... ...

hides away

[Nightydreams]

Lmao! Omg my pride as a man has been shattered!

Joking aside I am a guy, seriously haha! Perhaps my typing is feminine?

[Nellie]

Map features~

I shall hereby announce... We will only be releasing the SD demo for NaNoRenO.... *hides away*

[ShadowBerry]

No really, no matter what you say but....he just looks so old xD
Sataria....for real xD

Heh the Map looks cool
Is it important for the gameplay?

[Nightydreams]

Is it important for the gameplay?

Ooohh... Maybe

Possibly

Could be

trolling

[Nellie]

Heh? Looks old? I personally thought he actually looks kinda young =/
He's in his mid-twenties.
Is it because he has receding hairline? xD

Map... Let's just say it enhances the gameplay

[Nellie]

Double posting again... Ooops xD

This is probably going to be the last piece of update before the end of NaNoRenO (unless I decided to skive from actual work and get on LSF instead xD)

The title menu (work so far)... I've been really frustrated, not sure how to give it the 'suspense' feel... So yea =/ Opinions are appreciated... but I probably won't be able to do any changes in time for NaNo release >_<

[clua]

Double posting again... Ooops xD

This is probably going to be the last piece of update before the end of NaNoRenO (unless I decided to skive from actual work and get on LSF instead xD)

The title menu (work so far)... I've been really frustrated, not sure how to give it the 'suspense' feel... So yea =/ Opinions are appreciated... but I probably won't be able to do any changes in time for NaNo release >_<

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wow this cg looks so great! I like a lot the shading!
I cant wait to play it XD

[kaleidofish]

I love that CG. It really does give off a suspenseful feeling. They look like they've been searching for survivors for a while, like they're weary and broken down. Such intense gazes...like they're saying, "what now? What happens next?" after all they've been through already. Yeah, this is a rambley post - I'm just trying to say I support the image very much.

[Blane Doyle]

This all looks so... so AMAZING! Oh, my hands are twitching at the thought of seeing this in action!

[Nellie]

wow this cg looks so great! I like a lot the shading!
I cant wait to play it XD

Thank you! That means a lot... Hope I won't disappoint you though... Since I will only be releasing a short 15-20 mins demo due to my incompetent

I love that CG. It really does give off a suspenseful feeling. They look like they've been searching for survivors for a while, like they're weary and broken down. Such intense gazes...like they're saying, "what now? What happens next?" after all they've been through already. Yeah, this is a rambley post - I'm just trying to say I support the image very much.

Glad you approve of it.... Please don't be disappointed because the demo will just be a teaser... It'll end just as the actions start xD

This all looks so... so AMAZING! Oh, my hands are twitching at the thought of seeing this in action!

You might have to wait a slight longer than a week for the full action m(._.)m But I do hope you'll enjoy the demo. (It'll be your chance to tell me my writing s*cks and that I should get a decent writer xD)



Okie... I need to fill up the store list in the mall. Some help naming random stores which I can use? =3 Thanks!