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mwdh [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GXB]

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:21 pm
by Pyonkotchi
warning this story is really pink and girly proceed w/ caution

im gonna do it guys im gonna make this hAPPEn
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Valerie Amaranth was just a normal highschool girl until one day she was approached by a fairy named Alice, and transformed into a magical hero named Diamond Heart. Now she must protect the earth from monsters known as Shadow Parasites who steal the hearts of people as their source of energy.

Characters:

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Name: Valerie Amaranth
Age: 16
Alter Ego: Diamond Heart
Personality: Friendly, vain, stubborn, plucky, cheerful
The main character. she's basically an average teenager. She loves sweets,games, and anything cute,
she's been best friends with Sophie and Ethan since elementary school

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Name: Sophia Anderson
Age:16
Alter Ego: Sapphire Dream
Personaliy: intellegent, hardworking, overy ambitious, reckless, kind
One of Valerie's best friends, she's very smart and a fast learner.
she tends to take on too much work at one time and as a result, is often very tired, even sleeping through class.

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Name: Clover Vermillion
Age: 15
Alter Ego: Citrine Joy
Personality: Cheerful, adventuristic, reckless. energetic, childish
she comes from a really weathy family, her dad owns many businesses. she's a bit spoiled and bratty.
but very cheery and friendly. she tends to wander away from home a lot.

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Name: Christopher Farrow
Age: 17
Alter Ego:Emerald Spirit
Personality: Withdrawn, aimless, intellegent, reliable, rational
Alex's best friend, while alex is loud and social, chris is quieter and withdrawn. he usually just goes along with whatever Alex wants and is basically indifferent toward everything.
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Name: Ethan Matthews
Age:16
Alter ego: none d
Personality: friendly, clumsy, honest, reliable, a bit shy
Valerie's best guy friend, he's a talented artist and vice president of the schools anime club. he's an actual nice guy, and is always there for his friends.

Name: Alex Harvey
Age: 17
Alter Ego: Garnet Passion
Personality; Hotheaded, arrogant, determined, stubborn, friendly
Valeries classmate, he's a year ahead so she doesnt talk to him much. he's really social and playful, and often gets in trouble for being disruptive.
he loves sports and is always really energetic

pyonkotchi more like doesnt know the meaning of "small cast" why cant i hold all these characters??????

/sobs


Statistics:
The game contains 515 dialogue blocks, containing 4,306 words and 22,832
characters, for an average of 8.4 words and 44 characters per block.

The game contains 6 menus, 20 images, and 12 screens.

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:25 pm
by Pandora
Eee, magical girls! I am ridiculously excited for this.
Also, I love your art; it's so vibrant!

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:33 am
by ffs_jay
Wow, that art is beautiful. Look forward to seeing how this turns out, good luck with NaNo13!

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:43 am
by Deji
I want this. Badly. xD
Lovely cast! :D

Best of luck for you, Pyon! <3

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:43 am
by 15385bic
super sparkly pretty sprites *Q*

yes i want this too~ XD

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:49 am
by Rye
I feel the beautiful magic in the sprites while looking at them.
So cute! XD Huge cast for a month but I don't care! Finish it please because lots of people love it and want it ^^

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 10:05 am
by Pyonkotchi
Rye wrote:I feel the beautiful magic in the sprites while looking at them.
So cute! XD Huge cast for a month but I don't care! Finish it please because lots of people love it and want it ^^
i know xD i kept telling myself "hey man too many characters"
but i couldnt bring myself to get rid of any tho. /sobs
even if i cant finish the whole thing i want to try to at least make a good ammount of progress for like a demo or soemthing xD;;

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 11:47 am
by kuchiyume
waaaah i really like the art, plus the magical girl theme makes me think that this game will be awesome !!! good luck for your game :) .

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:03 pm
by specialtantei
I hope this will not be Madoka Magica all over again *shot*.
This game looks fun and light hearted, just what I would love to read after the hard time I've been through.
And yes, you have a quite large cast there :lol: . Good luck!

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:11 am
by Guest
This looks amazing! My favorite genre, magical girl! *___*

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:12 am
by Rikka
^ That was me. lol.

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:29 am
by Rye
Don't worry, you can manage to make at least a demo. (About 30 mins hopefully)
@Rikka: lol *wave wave*

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:49 am
by Cyrus
Love your character art. I want to play this :!:

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2013 1:09 am
by Pyonkotchi
The game contains 82 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 888 words,
for an average of 10.8 words per screen.
The game contains 0 menus.

thats actually p impressive by my standards lmao

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the textbox is p much done, w/ test text :Y dont worry guys there is no poopy cereal in the actual game

Re: Magical Warrior Diamond Heart [NaNo2013] [otome] [GXG/GX

Posted: Sat Mar 02, 2013 8:14 pm
by Aines445
A magical girl type surper girly otome game?.....................THAT'S AMAZING XD. There's so much pink in it and everything 8D, even though I really like purple, I like pink too. And oh god, even the guys have alter egos? (Well, except for Ethan but oh well XD) I totally want to know more! I'd love to see this game completed, since it kind of takes me back to the time where I'd watch those cartoons (Like their THAT old XD).