[FINISHED] My Teacher [Otome] [NaNoRenO 2013]

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[FINISHED] My Teacher [Otome] [NaNoRenO 2013]

#1 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:02 am

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TRAILER^^^^

***COMPLETED THREAD HERE***
Statistics:

The game contains 1,407 dialogue blocks, containing 14,799 words and 78,082
characters, for an average of 10.5 words and 55 characters per block.

The game contains 25 menus, 90 images, and 13 screens.
You are a very talented teacher/caretaker for the young age you are. You have made devil children into angels and have trained delinquents to become perfect students in a matter of days. You are nationally famous for your work and many parents and school teachers ask for your advice.

However, one day, you receive a phone call from a very powerful businessman, requesting your immediate aid. Because of the importance of the client, you rush to meet him personally in his office in the city. He then introduces you to his 4 EXTREMELY handsome sons (each having a different mother) and says, “One of these boys will be the next CEO of this company, but none of them are ready. They all still act like children. I ask that you train one of them with the best of your ability to become a mature adult, ready for my position.”

Problem is, you only get 3 days to do this. Are you ready to take on your greatest challenge yet?

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MAIN CHARACTERS:

-Heroine- The main character. She is a very mature young woman who trained fiercely to become the best teacher/caretaker she can be (inspired by her mother). A little stubborn (typical of a heroine) and sworn to her duty to live as a caretaker... or will one of the 4 sons change her mind of her future?

-Shinji- The naive, child son. The second son to be born. He is very optimistic about life and it often brings him to very bad situations, especially in the business room. He’s VERY trusting, but acts like a crying baby when he is betrayed. ENDINGS: Normal/Happy

-Kyosuke- The playboy, seductive son. The first son to be born. He is sly and very much a ladies’ man and it often drives him away from important matters, such as how to control a business meeting. He has a very active libido and is always victim to desire. ENDINGS: Normal/Happy

-Takumi- The hardass, rough son. The third son to be born. He is very hot-headed and hates to be questioned, which leads to very bad arguments and disagreements in the business room. He hates being wrong and will often be a pain when he is. ENDINGS: Normal/Happy

-Raizen- The silent, neutral son. The fourth son to be born. He is very much passive to the thought of the business world, which upsets his father greatly. However, he is the only son who won’t start a fight, but then agan he won’t even start a conversation. ENDINGS: Normal/Happy

SIDE CHARACTERS:

-Ryu Hakure- The Father of the 4 sons and top CEO of Hakure Industries.
-Secretary- Ryu's Secretary.
-Co-Workers- The workers of Hakure Industries. Some managed to be the problems of the sons in their venture to be CEO...
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Final Character Designs
From Left: Ryu Hakure (CEO Father), Takumi, Kyosuke, Heroine, Raizen, Shinji, Secretary.
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TEAM AS OF RIGHT NOW:
Writer/Director/Producer - Michaela Laws
Co-Writers/Producers: Helene Daviau, Samantha Chan
Artist: Nero279, roundmetal
Composer: Christopher Escalante
Actors:
Heroine - Helene Daviau
Shinji - Tyler James Thompson
Kyosuke - Bradley Gareth
Takumi - Tyler Coker
Raizen - Zach Aguilar
Ryu Hakure (CEO Father) - Alejandro Saab VA
Secretary - Jill Harris
Co-Workers - Lee Turner, Bree Page, Brittany Lauda, Derek Crawley, Jack Howarth
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Re: My Teacher [Otome] [NaNoRenO 2013]

#2 Post by Razz » Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:16 am

Really dig this idea and premise! Can't wait to see more!
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#3 Post by ofdawnandtwilight » Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:37 am

Awesome idea, it sounds so fun ^^
Have you found any artist? May I help?

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#4 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:40 am

@Razz, Thank you =D I can't wait to see the finished product myself hahaha!

@nero279, I do not have any artists that have volunteered =D If you can send me a reference of your work, I'd be happy to see it and probably have you on the team!

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#5 Post by ofdawnandtwilight » Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:46 am

Sure ^^ I hope you like anime style, here you go.

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#6 Post by TrickWithAKnife » Sat Mar 02, 2013 6:15 am

How old are the characters?
"We must teach them through the tools with which they are comfortable."
The #renpy IRC channel is a great place to chat with other devs. Due to the nature of IRC and timezone differences, people probably won't reply right away.

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#7 Post by Sexo Grammaticus » Sat Mar 02, 2013 6:15 am

Be a good teacher! Seduce your students!

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#8 Post by LVUER » Sat Mar 02, 2013 6:45 am

3 days!? Isn't that seems impossible? Human can't change that fast... And why the rush? Good premise, want to play this one when it's done ;)
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#9 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:25 am

@TrickWithAKnife, They are all around 21-25 in age. (We're not playing Teens here =w=)

@Sexo Grammaticus, Oh my xD

@LVUER, for the sake of the challenge, I kept it to 3 days or else there would be SOOOO much to add and work on etc etc. If we remake this officially after the challenge is done, I'll add more days and add more in depth storylines =w=

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#10 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:15 pm

**UPDATE: Character Concept art added and progress added. STILL looking for a BG artist and main composer**

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#11 Post by wonderland » Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:21 pm

The art is superb! The concept is very intriguing and obviously the art is awesome! (: Good luck, I'll be keeping my eye on this! :D
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#12 Post by Aines445 » Sun Mar 03, 2013 1:29 pm

A very cool idea that I'd most certainly want to see finished! I'm really wondering how our protagonist will be if she's a professional, and the art is very good (So is the logo ^-^). It's the kind of thing that definitely feels "otome-ish"(That's not a bad thing!). Good luck with this! ^-^

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#13 Post by try10 » Sun Mar 03, 2013 6:28 pm

The game's concept is very original and the boys seem interesting. I'll be watching this!

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#14 Post by ixWishing » Sun Mar 03, 2013 7:06 pm

I love the plot of this, and the art! xD
My favorites are Shinji and Raizen lol
/Totally not into the hot-headed or flirty types, lmao xD
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#15 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:49 pm

@wonderland, Aines445, try10, ixWishing,

Thank you so so much for your compliments! We hope you'll enjoy the final product!!

~~~We're Still looking for a Background Artist and an official game composer to join the fray!~~~

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