What Do You See? [Otome][School Life][Mystery][NaNo13]

[Tag-]

I think it looks pretty good, actually o_o

If you're wanting to change it, however, perhaps change the grey/green to a pastel pink, and the lining to a warmer brown?

[sorani]

I think it looks pretty good, actually o_o

If you're wanting to change it, however, perhaps change the grey/green to a pastel pink, and the lining to a warmer brown?

How about now XD?
I'm planning to change the lines latter when I start coloring, so don't mind that.^^;

[Tag-]

I like both colours, so in the end, I guess it's up to you xDD

[chocojax]

Agreeing with Tag-, both colors look nice to me.

Maybe to explore more options, try out maybe a darker, greyish-red? (I just like dark colors, lol.)

[sorani]

I like both colours, so in the end, I guess it's up to you xDD

Agreeing with Tag-, both colors look nice to me.

Maybe to explore more options, try out maybe a darker, greyish-red? (I just like dark colors, lol.)

XD Thanks a lot, I'll try that.

Here's a preview of the main menu. I'm still making some more corrections on Otome and it should be done.


Should I have a different pattern behind her, leave it as it is, or just take it out completely?

[15385bic]

i like the browns to her first outfit more
i like the checker bg but i think add something (shapes? hearts?) to the backgroung to fill some of the void? O_O

(and yay to kuro being chasable *__* - watch out here i come - fufufu)

[sorani]

Yes, done with the main menu ;_; It's sooooo pink XD



Progress is slow. Still need to write and draw orz. But great news is that I got a composer XD The're called the Twins, recruited by ScottySeng himself. They previously worked on Alice Hunt.

[Maelstrom-Fenrir]

As a big fan of mystery, any vn with a mystery tag, makes me excited.

I look forward to reading the completed vn.

Ooooh, that title looks so nice.

[Tag-]

That's a really pink title, alright xD. I think at the moment, the text is blending into the background a little too much; perhaps a soft, white padding might help?

[sorani]

That's a really pink title, alright xD. I think at the moment, the text is blending into the background a little too much; perhaps a soft, white padding might help?

Yeah, that's what I thought, so I changed this to clicked. Originally that was hover, but I guess its too light XD

[jamesaguilar]

I think you have a nice game character and story. Hoping for the best. I am more interested to know more about Akane who is Otome's upper classmate.

[sorani]

I think you have a nice game character and story. Hoping for the best. I am more interested to know more about Akane who is Otome's upper classmate.

^u^ thanks~

Ah, sorry for not updating this thread for a while OTL
Recently I caught a cold and my throat hurts. What really bad timing, too.
Here's my current lint.

Statistics:

The game contains 1,218 dialogue blocks, containing 8,365 words and 44,388
characters, for an average of 6.9 words and 36 characters per block.

The game contains 4 menus, 0 images, and 12 screens.

I wish I could type faster, but with only 1 week left, I'm going to have to cut some stuff out.
Well, what's great is that Spring Break is next week for me, so I'm going to have to cram everything for that week.
I wish I had stuff to show right now, but currently I've finished four out of nine bgs. It's going to be rather quick since I'm painting over Samu's photos and Uncle Mugen's free source bgs.
Art was at a standstill because I was writing, but I guess I should start drawing soon. I also have four cgs sketched out for the preparation of the next week.
...Wow, I really made this a lot of work for me OTL.

[ScottySeng]

Hello, programmer and co-writer here,

Unfortunately, we couldn't make the Nano deadline. Our story is far longer than we had originally thought it would be.
Due to the upcoming AP tests for Sorani, she can't work much on the VN during May.

However, we are still aiming at completing this VN. Our goal will be to have this completed by June 2013.

Thanks for the support,
I guarantee you'll like the completed project.

[borisoda]

Ah well still looking forward to the release!!

Love the concept and cute characters

Good luck on the AP exams!

[KochiyaChii]

Seems good! Looking forward to it