Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

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Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#1 Post by Patty » Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:50 am

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Logo by mirae1212 :)
In a post-apocalyptic world, only the utopian city of Paradox stands. However, it's actually hiding something darker: select participants are forced into a game of killing based on their talents, where survival of the fittest is at full force. Alliances form and break. No one is safe. It doesn't stop there for there are more dark secrets lying about. Can Satsuki survive the game to discover the secrets of Paradox’s origin, or will she die before then?
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Satsuki - a sarcastic yet well-meaning girl. Ever since her parents died in the apocalypse, she's been struggling on her own.


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Kaede - an incessantly cheerful participant of Paradox. His luck and immense strength are his greatest assets in the game.


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Andou - defensive, noisy, and a bit whiny. Andou's hacking skills though are anything but a nuisance.

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Ichi - a man of many secrets. His name is terribly fake, and his talent is unknown.

Other:

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??? - an enigma who has no known allies.

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Naose Taki - a playful vagrant who knows a lot about what happens in Paradox. Her information skills may be a great asset.

.~.~.~

Writing progess update: (as of March 15)
The game contains 757 dialogue blocks, containing 6,404 words and 33,809
characters, for an average of 8.5 words and 45 characters per block.

The game contains 4 menus, 0 images, and 12 screens.
.~.~.~

Other:

Wip BG (collab by Mirae and I :) )
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WIP Main Menu
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.~.~.~

Hey, everyone! :) I'm joining NaNoReNo again, and looking forward to see how this project shapes up ^^ I'm only going to complete a demo version for NaNo, however. :) I'll be continuing and finishing this after. Hopefully I won't disappoint? ovo;; I hope to get your feedback! I'll be updating this post with credits and etc as time goes by, so look forward to it! ;)

I'll also be happy to answer your questions, so fire away! ^^
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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#2 Post by Guest » Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:52 am

PATTY!

I look forward to the demo.

Good Luck!

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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#3 Post by Reikun » Mon Mar 04, 2013 3:58 am

Yeesssss~ Patty I have been waiting for this >:3 Good luck! You've made a lot of progress with your art and I can't wait to see how this turns out!!! Also WHITE HAIRED BOY???? *0* Patty, you have invoked my weakness................ OTL xD
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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#4 Post by Patty » Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:26 am

Guest wrote:PATTY!

I look forward to the demo.

Good Luck!
Thanks! :)
Reikun wrote:Yeesssss~ Patty I have been waiting for this >:3 Good luck! You've made a lot of progress with your art and I can't wait to see how this turns out!!! Also WHITE HAIRED BOY???? *0* Patty, you have invoked my weakness................ OTL xD
Reiiiiiiii homigash *v* Thank you! :) Glad to hear that I made progress (?) XD Ohoho, and yeah, white haired boys are so *v*
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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#5 Post by try10 » Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:12 pm

I always loved plots about post-apocalyptics worlds. And a KILIING GAME?! What more can I ask for? This game is going to be a huge success! I will stalk this thread cause I'm loving what I've seen so far. :D :D :D

Good luck with this awesome project! :wink:

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#6 Post by Reikun » Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:28 pm

Patty wrote: Reiiiiiiii homigash *v* Thank you! :) Glad to hear that I made progress (?) XD Ohoho, and yeah, white haired boys are so *v*
Ahaha, I meant to say that your art has really improved! :> Maybe I should whip up some pre-mature fanart later this week???
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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#7 Post by Kokoro Hane » Mon Mar 04, 2013 4:34 pm

I will be excited once this demo is done for NaNoRenO~ I love post-apocalyptic stories *.*
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#8 Post by EchoLove » Mon Mar 04, 2013 6:37 pm

More nano goodness :D

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#9 Post by amzcoffee » Tue Mar 05, 2013 2:57 am

woot the more survival games the better! I'm looking forward to this~ :D
Hope the demo and the complete game will be free 'cuz I have no money ToT

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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#10 Post by Patty » Tue Mar 05, 2013 9:02 am

Updates:

We have an awesome logo by my friend, the lovely mirae1212 :)
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Also, on writing progress:
The game contains 402 dialogue blocks, containing 3,543 words and 18,631
characters, for an average of 8.8 words and 46 characters per block.
.~.~.~

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try10 wrote:I always loved plots about post-apocalyptics worlds. And a KILIING GAME?! What more can I ask for? This game is going to be a huge success! I will stalk this thread cause I'm loving what I've seen so far. :D :D :D

Good luck with this awesome project! :wink:
I'm happy you're loving it! :) Thanks :D
Reikun wrote:Ahaha, I meant to say that your art has really improved! :> Maybe I should whip up some pre-mature fanart later this week???
Thanks! ^^ *O* Ooh, that would be great! :D
Kokoro Hane wrote:I will be excited once this demo is done for NaNoRenO~ I love post-apocalyptic stories *.*
Glad you're excited :) We share the same love for post-apocalyptic stories, hehe
EchoLove wrote:More nano goodness :D
NaNo's definitely an exciting part of the year! :)
amzcoffee wrote:woot the more survival games the better! I'm looking forward to this~ :D
Hope the demo and the complete game will be free 'cuz I have no money ToT
Happy to hear you're looking forward to Paradox :) Of course it will be free (and I have no money too, hehe) ^^
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#11 Post by try10 » Tue Mar 05, 2013 9:21 am

The logo really looks nice. It's perfect for this kind of game. :D

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#12 Post by Patty » Wed Mar 06, 2013 11:37 am

try10 wrote:The logo really looks nice. It's perfect for this kind of game. :D
Thanks, I'm glad you like the logo. Mirae says thank you too! :)

.~.~.~

Satsuki's sprite: (still need to make the alternate expressions, hehe.)
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Word Count Update:
The game contains 523 dialogue blocks, containing 4,460 words and 23,352
characters, for an average of 8.5 words and 45 characters per block.
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Re: Paradox [NaNoReNo 2013] [Post-Apocalyptic] [Otome]

#13 Post by Patty » Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:06 pm

Kaede Sprite Preview: (need to tweak some stuff, and put in diff expressions)

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Wordcount Update:
The game contains 568 dialogue blocks, containing 4,851 words and 25,364
characters, for an average of 8.5 words and 45 characters per block.
Wasn't able to write as much the last few days, hopefully my schedule has eased up and I can finish writing ^O^ Hope you all are liking the sprites too~ ^^
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#14 Post by Maelstrom-Fenrir » Tue Mar 12, 2013 1:43 am

There something, I don't know what. But something about your drawing/coloring, that makes me mellow. I love looking at your art Patty.

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#15 Post by Patty » Tue Mar 12, 2013 10:31 pm

Maelstrom-Fenrir wrote:There something, I don't know what. But something about your drawing/coloring, that makes me mellow. I love looking at your art Patty.
Thanks, Fenrir ^^

Update!: Got 2 sprites done yesterday (@O@)

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Andou (oh you little tsundere)

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And this lovely lass who wasn't included at the first cast of characters listed. :)

Working on BGs alongside with the Sprites (with the help of Mirae)

WIP BG:

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Mirae does the sketch, first lineart, and color blocking :) I just touch up some of the lineart and colors XD

.~.~.~

Wordcount:
The game contains 730 dialogue blocks, containing 6,264 words and 32,948
characters, for an average of 8.6 words and 45 characters per block.
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