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Themes
Mystery, Fantasy, Supernatural, Romance

Characters

Shears
The heroine.
Because of the memory loss, she has no idea why she got stuck inside the castle. A bit shy and reclusive.

the Earl
A young man who takes care of Shears as she stays in the castle. He prepares the food and keeps Shears company whenever she feels lonely (ooooh creepy). He's a gentle person oh really now?

Time
A deity that comes to mess around with the Earl.

Progress
Story Outlining/Summary: 96% -I just need to clean some stuff up and add more details.
Art: ...
Script: 5%
GUI: 100%
I've given up on trying to make my own GUI so I'll be using Ren'Py's instead.

Notes
Hi guys, this will be my first OELVN project and I am totally pumped up with it. This will also be the first time wherein I am going to work hard and make some effort hehehe *sweatdrops* ('coz I'm actually a lazy person in real life). When I was on Tumblr, I saw this post about NaNoReNo 2014 coming up and I was like, woah... I'd better go and participate in the event. So now, here I am (yay~) with Can't Say Goodbye. The title is a total spoiler *cough*. It is the product of my obsession of yanderes. More shall be posted later on...

Some Clarifications
-This is not the kind of game where you have to click around the background and find items so that the story can progress. Nope. It really isn't. It plays out as a VN with choices and you decide on what action to take. nothin' special yo
-Currently has 4 endings. But it isn't final yet. (I've written the endings on my handy dandy notebook).
-This isn't much of a funny/humorous kind of story. It's a bit dark actually.

My Questions yo
I would be so happy if you guys could answer some of these:

1. You guys approve of yanderes right? *blink blink*
(just one for now...)
feedback appreciated :3

p.s. Steamgirl, the guest who replied to your message is actually me. I guess something happened with the wi-fi connection when I was replying to your post and it ended up logging me out and I became a guest instead :0



Updates:
March 8, 2014- Current word count is 500+ Ahahaha. A bit short as of now... I'm also working on the character art -_- I just downloaded a crack version of Photoshop (yay) and oh my gosh, making lineart has been made 10x easier. All those brushes kyaaa.

I'm a bit late on schedule I was suppose to finish the concept art but thanks to Sengoku Basara I was unable to do so -__-

Whoaaa it seems I couldn't finish this in time :0
I guess I'll place this in the WIP section (not nanoreno) in my free time >,<. Congratulations to those who finished!! You guys are awesome and for those who read this thread, I thank you as well.

Ooo like the sound of this! I don't think Shears is weird for a surname? As in, Lady Shears? But hey, it's fantasy - do what you want!

No idea what yandere is. I had to google it. It doesn't sound... nice? Just insane and violent?

asdfzklghj!! A response!!! Hello~

Steamgirl wrote:Ooo like the sound of this! I don't think Shears is weird for a surname? And in, Lady Shears? But hey, it's fantasy - do what you want!

Thank goodness ^_^;
p.s. Lady Shears sounds nice.

Steamgirl wrote:No idea what yandere is. I had to google it. It doesn't sound... nice? Just insane and violent?

And is also a psycho and an obsessive character oh-- and the yandere's craziness is closely tied with love.

I love mysteries ^^. Good luck on your first project C:.

1. You guys approve of yanderes right? *blink blink*

Sure I can be down for that if it's done well X3.

Googaboga wrote:I love mysteries ^^. Good luck on your first project C:.

1. You guys approve of yanderes right? *blink blink*

Sure I can be down for that if it's done well X3.

I will do my best :3

Gonna play this game! I love mystery games! ^ 7 ^

Hmmm . . . amnesia, a castle, a mysterious person . . . all pretty common elements in a mystery. Nevertheless, I'm interested to see what you do with these things.

To answer your question, I have no particular problems with that character trope as long as the character to which it is applied is engaging and believable. But I don't think saying, "Oh, I'm thinking of including a yandere character. What should I do?" should be how you go about it. If you define a character too much before really writing, you risk setting limitations on him or her. If you create a character who, in the process of being fleshed out, seems connected to a particular archetype but is still strong enough to be more than that, you're on the right track. Don't create a character with the sole intent of filling a role---if you write well, your characters will find their own places in the story.

Best wishes!

I second to that ^

cuz we love all good and believable characters whatever their personality are!

coffin-tan wrote:And is also a psycho and an obsessive character oh-- and the yandere's craziness is closely tied with love.

Doesn't really sound like my cup of tea, but I'm sure I'd enjoy any well-written character regardless of archetype. When a writer writes the stuff she/he loves writing they usually write better stories and characters for it. So the most important thing is that you like writing yanderes.

coffin-tan wrote:p.s. Steamgirl, the guest who replied to your message is actually me. I guess something happened with the wi-fi connection when I was replying to your post and it ended up logging me out and I became a guest instead :0

Don't worry, I had figured out what had happened.

This sounds interesting
Yandere? Have no problem with that ^^

The plot seems good enough. I'm willing to give it a try after it's finished. Good luck.