Brewitched [Magical Girl, Otome] [GxB] [NaNoReNo 2014!]

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Brewitched [Magical Girl, Otome] [GxB] [NaNoReNo 2014!]

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Visual Novel. I'm hoping to have either a dating element or a point & click element, where you can find more and more of the teas in BG scenes (Phoenix Wright-style) to add to Effie's powers/inventory.

PREMISE

Effie was just like every other high-school girl until a weird looking tea-shop pops up on her route home. On a dare to go inside, she hesitantly drinks a cup of tea from the young owner of the store and then, everything changes. The shop disappears, the owner keeps popping up and there's a whole new set of responsibilities to undertake. Infused with new magical tea powers, Effie must defend her town from distraught and misguided spirits, working with her friends and the strange tea-shop owner. Tea, often associated with spiritual harmony and calm, is the weapon she will use in her new magical form to defeat them, soothing them back to their normal state. DARJEELING! EARL GREY! OCHA!

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Effie (Efthymia) Panetta
protagonist, resident magical girl, owner of most hideous name 2014
HAVE DISGUSTING QUICK SKETCHES
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Chai
Effie's tea spirit side-kick/token adorable creature
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Eden
tea shop owner, Mysterious Guy, he who has no last name, earl grey hot
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Hollis
spirit rebellion leader, antagonist, equally Mysterious Guy, has nice robes

Myrtia Menashi
effie's lady bff, classmate
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Arte Brookshire
effie's lord bff, classmate

PROGRESS

Story: 50%
Sprites: 25%
Coding: 15%
Script: 2%...
Backgrounds: hahahaha
GUI: 20%

Opinions/comments welcome!
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#2 Post by Steamgirl »

OMG I think I'm in love. You HAVE to finish this game - I really really want to play it! The premise is just too charming!

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#3 Post by Mad Harlequin »

I totally agree with Steamgirl! I'm a sucker for magical girl stories and interesting storytelling. I love tea. And this game combines all of those things.

If this doesn't happen I will be very sad. :cry:
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#4 Post by Googaboga »

Tea-hee the title made me giggle.

Anywho this sounds wonderful and Chai is certainly adorable :mrgreen:. The logo is also excellent.

Good luck ^^.
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#5 Post by noeinan »

This looks awesome, and I love the adorable tea pot logo. Looking forward to your progress!
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Thank you so much for the kind words, guys! I'm really glad you like the premise and hope you'll stay for the ride. Magical girls were some of my best role models when I was a kid (Sailor Moon, Card Captor Sakura, Magic Knights Rayearth etc.) so I wanted to do something along those lines. (:

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#7 Post by Derpravity »

I'm also looking forward to seeing how this progresses! It looks adorable. I can't wait to see coloured sprites.
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Proudly presenting the first lined sprite of Effie! Will do expressions later today. (: Also added the finished version of Chai to the front post, still kinda undecided if I like him or not but. It's done!

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Chai is so cute! And your inking is really nice. <3

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Thank you! Hopefully starting on the writing, coding and UI tomorrow. Before I hit the hay, been working on expressions/deciding colours for Effie. (:
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#11 Post by Mad Harlequin »

Effie looks great! I like that she's not super-skinny.

Chai is adorable and colorful and deserves lots of hugs! :)
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#12 Post by Crenshaw6 »

I love the idea (always adored mahou shoujo), even more so because I drink tea so often.

It'd be interesting to somehow include herbal teas into the concept, as many do not regard them as "true teas". They'd be like... fakes, posers... villains?

Anyway, I am really looking forward to this! The art so far is looking great.

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#13 Post by Mad Harlequin »

Maybe the herbals could be the "monsters of the day." (But I love herbal teas and I don't care one bit if some people bicker about their status. :lol:)
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#14 Post by Green Glasses Girl »

That pun.

I look forward to this!
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#15 Post by pickle131 »

So far this has an awesome idea, an amazing pun, magical girl theme and as I'm obsessed with tea...I'm so excited XD
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