Maid With Perfection [Comedy/Action][BxG/GxG][NaNoReno2015]

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Maid With Perfection [Comedy/Action][BxG/GxG][NaNoReno2015]

#1 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sun Mar 01, 2015 1:32 am

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It’s your lucky day! You won a special lottery! In the mail, you get the deed to a large estate in a place you’ve never heard of. You find yourself being driven there in a luxury car, feeling like a billion dollars.

As you arrive, you meet your maid, whom you get to name. She apparently the best Maid in the area and the fact that she chose you to be her master/mistress should honor you. The first day goes almost like a dream: your maid prepares amazing food, cleans the house, preps your bath, and even flirts with you a bit! Lucky you!

The second day, however, ends up showing you the true nature of the world you now reside in. You are visited by a noble woman and, almost out of the blue, her maid and yours start FIGHTING! You are told that the Maids are the true power of the Nobles and that the Maids are not only trained as servants, but also as Soldiers and Guardians. By moving into the mansion, you signed yourself to represent your maid in the never-ending Maid Games.

The battle between the maids ends in a draw and the noblewoman gives you one week to train your maid up to par. If she loses, you lose the maid AND your fortune! However, she can't just train the entire week! She STILL has to perform her duties as a maid and keep the house clean and keep you fed! If she doesn't, then she will be taken away and replaced!

Will you be able to keep your newly obtained rich life and your maid?!


FEATURES:
-Nameable Main Character-
-Nameable Maid-
-Male and Female MC options-
-Original Art/GUI-
-3 Endings! (One Happy, Two Sad)-

MAIN CHARACTERS:
The Main Character (CV: Alejandro Saab / Samantha Chan) - AKA, YOU! You are the Lucky Person who is given the chance to become a rich noble! You are given a mansion, land, money, and a personal maid to start your life with! However, you will quickly learn that things are not as easy as it seems when you're a noble...
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The Maid (CV: Helene Daviau-Hunt) - Sweet and flirty, this maid chose to be your maid and is considered to be the best maid around. You later find out that she’s the best maid not just for her immaculate cleaning and servitude, but she is also the best Maid Fighter. How did you manage to get lucky enough to get her?!
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Angela Worthing (CV: Cayla Martin) - A very strong-willed and rather sly noble-woman. She is calculating and uncharacteristically calm about situations, but her intents are clear: Take over noble territory and become the most powerful noble. She is rather insulted at your maid and refuses to acknowledge her power, trusting Red to win her her power.
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'Red' (CV: Michaela Laws) - The second best maid around, both in fighting and servitude. She is feisty and nasty, teasing your maid with direct insults and intended low hits. However, she is completely obedient to her mistress, dropping the feisty act with a simple demand. She truly does care for her mistress beyond anything else.

(Character Sketches by Michaela Laws, Actual Art Updates by Ryuushiro-Waffle)

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CREATIVE TEAM:
-Writer/Programmer: Michaela Laws-
-Sprite and CG Artist: Ryuushiro-Waffle
-BG Artist: JarOfMud-
-Composer: Christopher Escalante-
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#2 Post by waffrus » Sun Mar 01, 2015 2:24 am

Yay, I'm glad to see this topic get posted! Saw some blog posts about it earlier.

I played your Seduce Me game, and it was very charming. So I know this'll be great as well.
Excited about this one because maid uniforms are so cute, huhuhu. Looking forward to when the character designs get done.
Hope the mad dash for the deadline goes well! <:

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#3 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Mon Mar 02, 2015 2:47 am

____/Karolyn the Maid Art Updated! <3
waffrus wrote:Yay, I'm glad to see this topic get posted! Saw some blog posts about it earlier.

I played your Seduce Me game, and it was very charming. So I know this'll be great as well.
Excited about this one because maid uniforms are so cute, huhuhu. Looking forward to when the character designs get done.
Hope the mad dash for the deadline goes well! <:
Thank you so much! <3 I'm glad you liked Seduce Me! Hopefully Maid with Perfection will be just as fun!
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#4 Post by Ryuushiro » Mon Mar 02, 2015 7:21 am

Me about this project:

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//no, really, I'm so excited wahhh! //////
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#5 Post by Ryuushiro » Tue Mar 03, 2015 1:58 pm

Just to update a little:

I can't really use my computer for now since I'm not home today, but that's no excuse for me no to do anything! ;u;

I've always liked to see traditional character concepts and studies from Visual Novels, so I made a small one just so that I can get used to the characters and their differences~
(Sorry for my horrible handwriting!)

This is just a quick sketch showing what's to come! > u < Let's all keep working hard!~



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#6 Post by Awesomepigman » Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:49 pm

Aw so pretty ^o^
I'm psyched for this! I really love the idea of sort of figuring out how to be a noble and think this looks really fun.
Happy NaNo-ing! ^.^

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#7 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Thu Mar 05, 2015 12:52 am

Glad people are excited for it!!

Updated Red's art and GUI shots!
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#8 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Fri Mar 06, 2015 12:15 am

Good job with the art Ryuushiro! They look really great. Good luck on making it to the end of the month :)

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#9 Post by Ryuushiro » Fri Mar 06, 2015 2:30 pm

Oh, thank you so much, it really means a lot to me! ;7;

We are all working very hard! (*≧∀≦)ゞ
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#10 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sun Mar 08, 2015 1:32 am

UPDATE~
Angela Worthing Sprite has been posted for preview! <3
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#11 Post by pickle131 » Mon Mar 09, 2015 1:41 pm

The updates are looking so good!
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#12 Post by milkcarton » Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:34 am

I am loving the updates!

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#13 Post by VAPMichaelaLaws » Sun Mar 15, 2015 3:07 pm

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WIP Dialogue Box. Keeping it simple~ If we have time when all is said and done, I may mess around with it but for now it's simple~
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#14 Post by Harliqueen » Sun Mar 15, 2015 4:19 pm

Nothing wrong with simple!

That background looks incredible, and the sprites, and, well, all of it really :D
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#15 Post by PyTom » Sun Mar 15, 2015 6:56 pm

Honestly, I find the text hard to read on the bright purple, which is mostly used in games as a color key.
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