Claudia [Fairytale, Romance] [NaNoRenO 2015] - Completed

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Claudia [Fairytale, Romance] [NaNoRenO 2015] - Completed

#1 Post by laspis » Tue Mar 10, 2015 10:40 am

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Hi everyone!
This is my first time joining NaNoRenO. (In fact, I just knew this event exists one week ago.) The game is my first ever game made using Ren'Py, and maybe the first ever game I ever finish. Just typing is making me nervous *sweats*
Okay, this game is a kinetic novel loosely based on a fairytale called "Little Brother and Little Sister".
I'm working on this project solo and I only learned Ren'Py for one week, but I'll try my best!

-------------Story----------------
Nak encounters a mysterious girl called 'Vivace' who claims to be a fairy. This encounter leads to many unexpected events....When Nak finally gets adopted, his new 'mother' is not the kind of person he expects her to be. Through the harsh days living in a secluded mansion behind iron fence, the only thing that keeps him alive is a girl called Claudia.
PLAN:
Week 1: Writing & Character Sketches & Music (Complete)
Week 2: (I have exams this week...) Backgrounds & Sprites (Backgrounds are filtered images.) (COMPLETE)
Week 3: Sprites & Coding (Complete
<Week 4>: Proofread & Final touches (Done!)


--------------Characters---------------
Before we proceed I would like to make a confession...I suck at digital art.
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Claudia...who looks very creepy indeed. She is a calm, emotionless, girl with few words.
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The Red Witch, the main 'antagonist' of the story. She may look pretty, but she has the personality of a devil.
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A sketch of Prince Philbert, the easy-going genius but sometimes idiotic prince. He is Snow White's son.
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Vivace is a mysterious fairy who lives in a shack in the woods. Her origins remain unclear, but she seems to be an important figure...


Nak - A boy from the south east. He acts carefree but is also very sensitive and easily discouraged at times.

More characters will be updated :D

Feel free to comment on anything.

If I make any changes to this post, I will do it in dark blue so you can see. Thank you for taking your time reading.


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The game's thread is here: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=31394






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Re: Claudia [Fairytale, Romance] [NaNoRenO 2015]

#2 Post by steve_T » Tue Mar 10, 2015 9:18 pm

sounds like an interesting story

I look forward to seeing it

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#3 Post by greenteadreams » Wed Mar 11, 2015 12:08 am

I wouldn't say that your art sucks; I actually really like it. I particularly like Vivace's design.

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#4 Post by laspis » Fri Mar 13, 2015 10:48 am

steve_T wrote:sounds like an interesting story

I look forward to seeing it
I'm glad you look forward to it. :D
greenteadreams wrote:I wouldn't say that your art sucks; I actually really like it. I particularly like Vivace's design.
Thank you so much! This is my first time doing something like this so I appreciate your comment.

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Re: Claudia [Fairytale, Romance] [NaNoRenO 2015]

#5 Post by Harliqueen » Fri Mar 13, 2015 12:15 pm

This sounds really interesting, I always love stuff based of fairytales :D

I adore the Red Witch's outfit!

Good luck with NaNo :)
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#6 Post by laspis » Tue Mar 17, 2015 1:10 am

Harliqueen wrote:This sounds really interesting, I always love stuff based of fairytales :D

I adore the Red Witch's outfit!

Good luck with NaNo :)
Thank you :D I also love fairytale based stuff. I'm having a lot of fun working on this project.

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#7 Post by laspis » Sun Mar 22, 2015 8:35 am

I'm very close to finished with the sprites. There was unexpected load of work (*cough* science fair *cough*) so I'm a little behind on the schedule right now. Well, time to go colour more characters!
Here are more supporting casts:
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The 'Little Red Riding Hood' who lives in the palace with Snow White and Philbert. Also called the 'black crow', she never shows any emotions and looks down on everyone.
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Akai is Nak's best friend. He isn't friendly and you wouldn't want to mess with him.
Tell me what you think :D

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#8 Post by dreamy » Sun Mar 22, 2015 9:05 am

Wah, little red riding hood looks so cute, even though she seems so emo. I'm looking forward to seeing this project, it sounds really cute! Good luck :D
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So calm down and listen..."

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#9 Post by laspis » Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:08 am

Only one more day left in NaNo! I'm in the process of proofreading and adjusting some things like the transitions and music. I will post the finished game by the end of the day, hopefully.
This is my first game so please don't kill me if it doesn't meet your expectations :lol:

Screenshot:
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Statistics:

The game contains 642 dialogue blocks, containing 5,241 words and 28,127
characters, for an average of 8.2 words and 44 characters per block.

The game contains 0 menus, 52 images, and 12 screens.

...In other words, it's a short game.
Follow me on twitter to see my game progresses: @karita_solo
My tumblr: karita-01
Website: (unfinished) https://karita01.wordpress.com/

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