[redatced] Life (Horror/Comedy) (NaNoRenO 2016) [COMPLETED]

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[redatced] Life (Horror/Comedy) (NaNoRenO 2016) [COMPLETED]

#1 Post by Katy133 » Mon Feb 29, 2016 9:15 pm

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NaNoRenO 2016 || [Free]
Is this a visual novel?
> Yes

Is this a comedy?
> Yes

Is this a horror game?
> Yes

Are there jumpscares?
> No. The visual novel will rely on atmosphere.

Is this fiction?
> Error

Is this game what it seems?
> No

Is this by Katy133?
> Yes

What is the game's twist?
> [redacted]

What does "redacted" mean?
> Pronounced: /ri'dakt/ Verb. Definition: To edit, erase, censor, or obscure.
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THE STORY… sort of

Adrian has just moved into an old mansion with his girlfriend, Rebecca. After another couple hurriedly leave the mansion, a spooky backstory about the house is revealed, and some seemingly unexplainable events occur, Adrian comes to a conclusion...

He realises that he is in a horror game. A badly-written horror game.

And he wants to leave...

SOME CHARACTERS
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Left to right: Sheska (doggy), Adrian (protagonist), and Tirle (androgynous tarot card reader).
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THE TEAM

Art, Writing, & Programming..............Katy133
Art.............................................YuukiCrossPudding
Art.............................................fmjaye
Art.............................................Kyuu
Art.............................................Norbez

FEATURES
  • Multiple endings.
  • Second Chance button: If you die in the game, you're given an option to go back to a previous point in time.
  • Other features: It's a mysteryyyy...
## Hello? Can anyone read this?
## I don't know if you can see this, but I need your help.
## I need you to s̝̲̪̬̀t̴͚͍͙̼̘̟ͅo͚̣̙͝ͅṕ̥̳̳̫ ҉̭h̴̰̜̣̳͍e͕̣͖̮̫̯͘ṛ̹̳ͅ ̖̰͕̩̰̪̜b̞̪̺̬e̺̥̻͔̩f̘͇̩̖̳͞o̱̜̠̗̬̼͉r̖̦̭̩͉̳͙e̛̹̫ ̴͍̳̟i̙̺͎͕ͅt̙̠̟͝'̞̘̕s͏̼̞ ̹̦̱͕̦̰t̻̞o̭o̩̭̘̘̙̟ ͏̖̮̱̖l͈̫̭̯a̮̖̤̘̩̩͘t̳̱͇̹e͙͟.̬̞̩̹̗͚͡


PLEASE COMMENT

-What are your first impressions in general?
-Are you interested in any particular characters?
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#2 Post by Windchimes » Mon Feb 29, 2016 9:36 pm

Omg this looks really interesting. Love the idea of the Second Chance button... I die a lot in horror games xD Really interested to see how horror and comedy will be mixed together.

First impressions... well, the stuff above. Also, is there a significance to "HANA" from the cover image? (I might have just missed something obvious because I'm stupid, sorry xD)

Anyways, good luck for your project <3
PS: The comment lines with the (idek what that is at the end) messing up the text is creepy already ;;
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#3 Post by Chancellorchile » Mon Feb 29, 2016 9:41 pm

oh! This looks good! I can't wait to see more of it!
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#4 Post by Ghost of Crux » Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:20 pm

You had me sold at "he's in a badly-written horror game".

First impressions? I don't know. It's absolutely brilliant. I love the idea, and the lack of jumpscares, and the second chance button. I almost never download horror-- but I'm invested in this enough that I'll download it at a heartbeat. I'd even embrace any twists that might come this way. I love the premise.
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#5 Post by fmjaye » Mon Feb 29, 2016 10:59 pm

This is gonna be great! ٩(。•ㅅ•。)و ✧ I'm excited to be working on it!
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#6 Post by KittyKatStar » Mon Feb 29, 2016 11:25 pm

First impression: you got me at badly written horror :D

I enjoyed Three Guys That Paint and Must Love Jaws, so best of luck to you and your team!
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#7 Post by ALCOR_etc » Mon Feb 29, 2016 11:28 pm

This looks so exciting! I generally avoid anything tagged "horror", but this game seems really meta and I love love love meta games. I'm really looking forward to what you guys can accomplish, and I'll definitely give this a try at the end of March. I think I'll really appreciate the second chance button, because I will probably die a lot.
if it's "badly written horror" it won't give me nightmares, right? >_<;

Also I'm guessing that "Hana" will end up being something significant. Looking forward to any twists you throw at the reader!
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#8 Post by LadyOfGatsby » Mon Feb 29, 2016 11:59 pm

I'm on board with everyone else here haha, goodluck!
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#9 Post by Weenily » Tue Mar 01, 2016 12:37 am

Oh man this looks amazing!!! The first post was already really fun to read and cleverly formatted, I'm definitely looking forward to the game! The "What is the game's twist" >[redacted] joke was so good omg. The second chance button is definitely a feature I'm thankful for because I usually die a lot in games like these huhu. Best of luck to your team (and to Adrian and Rebecca as well)!
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#10 Post by Amy_oai » Tue Mar 01, 2016 9:13 am

A game in a game, and not just any game, a badly written game.
That's it; I'm a fan!

Looking forward to see more of this :D
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#11 Post by yoshibb » Tue Mar 01, 2016 12:27 pm

Your games are always so creative, so I can't wait to see what you come up with. Horror games are way better without jump scares, IMO, so I'm glad you're not relying on them. We'll see how far I can get without dying hehe.

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#12 Post by YossarianIII » Tue Mar 01, 2016 10:44 pm

You had me at "horror comedy, no jump scares" :). I'm a big fan of stuff like Cabin in the Woods, Shaun of the Dead, and Evil Dead 2.

This premise sounds different than any of the other horror comedies I've seen, so I'm excited to see what you do with it. Best of luck!


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#13 Post by MimirollCookie » Tue Mar 01, 2016 10:53 pm

Creepy.. Good luck anyways :)

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#14 Post by clua » Wed Mar 02, 2016 12:09 am

When I saw the OP picture in Twitter I thought it was so cool but I got the impression the game was going to be called "Hana"
Good luck with your project! I think the Horror/Comedy tag is getting everyone XD (In a good way!)
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#15 Post by KiloTango » Wed Mar 02, 2016 5:58 am

I utterly love the concept for this one. Can't wait to see more of it!
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