Starlit Flowers [GxG] [NaNo16] [WIP THREAD] GAME DONE!!!!

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#46 Post by Zelan » Mon Mar 07, 2016 5:37 pm

That art is adorable! owo I love it so much. And tell your best friend her songs are lovely! The title theme fits the premise perfectly. And I can't wait to see what the writing will look like! ^_^

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#47 Post by momo » Thu Mar 10, 2016 3:01 am

@Zelan Thank you!! :’)

Backgrounds have been a real struggle for the past few days but I’ve managed to finish one of the forest backgrounds. Not super happy with how it turned out tbh, but I guess it’s good enough for someone who rarely does backgrounds xD

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#48 Post by Mandy » Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:40 am

Look at those beautiful forest backgrounds! *w*
I'm in love with the dark one, huehuehue~!

Anyway, I just wanted to say that the script for Starlit Flowers is now 20k words long! I still have some scenes to write but I should finish the draft by the end of the week. Then I'll start the editing phase!
This is exciting! ^w^

And thanks for the nice comments! <3

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#49 Post by KiloTango » Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:57 am

Those backgrounds are gorgeous! And great to hear the writing is going well :)
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#50 Post by MimirollCookie » Thu Mar 10, 2016 7:40 am

This is really cute!!!
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#51 Post by Kowai » Thu Mar 10, 2016 9:25 am

Well... For someone who rarely does background, you did great! ♥ And since it matches the sprites so well, you can tell yourself that mission is accomplished for that one.

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#52 Post by Zelan » Thu Mar 10, 2016 4:37 pm

Like Kowai said, the backgrounds fit with the cute style and theme well. Besides, I've always thought that sprites are more important than the backgrounds (since that's what we're looking at), so as long as the backgrounds are halfway decent you're good to go. ^_^ I would call yours more than decent, though - they're simple but serene-looking. c:

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#53 Post by Candy☆Giants » Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:05 pm

Oh, wow. The art style is so lovely, it gives me warm and fuzzly feels! :'D

Definitely gonna play this when it's out.

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#54 Post by Mandy » Fri Mar 11, 2016 4:54 am

!~UPDATE~!

Hey!

I just wanted to let everyone know that Momo and I have decided to make Starlit Flowers a Kinetic Visual Novel. Meaning, there will only be one ending and there will be no choices.
We expect the finished script to be around 18-20k words long.

Thanks for all your support! ^^

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#55 Post by momo » Fri Mar 11, 2016 6:04 am

Ahhh thank you so much everyone!! I was expecting far too much from myself and I tend to be too critical of my own work but I'm glad you guys liked those BGs!! I finished the second forest background and it looks a lot nicer than the one I posted yesterday but... somehow ended up in a completely different style? I dunno haha, it just kinda happened. But I'm super pleased with how it turned out and we've decided to scrap the previous one and just use this one.

EDIT: Fixed the colours and values a bit.

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#56 Post by Hi.In.Ni » Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:29 am

This looks so good. It looks profesional. I'm amazed, it's so good
Please, check my NaNoRenO entry!
That was easy!! [NSFW] [BxG/B] [NaNoRenO2016]
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 50&t=37491

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#57 Post by momo » Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:24 pm

@Hi.In.Ni Thank you!!! :')

Finished another background!! I'm having a much easier time with the BGs now that I've figured out the style :'D

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#58 Post by Mandy » Sat Mar 12, 2016 1:15 am

The first draft for the script is finished! It stands at 17k.
I'll start the editing/rewriting phase on Monday~! :3

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#59 Post by momo » Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:08 am

3 down, 4 more to go!! '-')9

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#60 Post by Zelan » Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:26 pm

Oh my gosh, that rain effect for the cave background is perfect. <3 I like the style that you're using for these backgrounds!

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