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Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Mon Mar 07, 2016 5:37 pm
by Zelan
That art is adorable! owo I love it so much. And tell your best friend her songs are lovely! The title theme fits the premise perfectly. And I can't wait to see what the writing will look like! ^_^

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 3:01 am
by momo
@Zelan Thank you!! :’)

Backgrounds have been a real struggle for the past few days but I’ve managed to finish one of the forest backgrounds. Not super happy with how it turned out tbh, but I guess it’s good enough for someone who rarely does backgrounds xD

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Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:40 am
by Mandy
Look at those beautiful forest backgrounds! *w*
I'm in love with the dark one, huehuehue~!

Anyway, I just wanted to say that the script for Starlit Flowers is now 20k words long! I still have some scenes to write but I should finish the draft by the end of the week. Then I'll start the editing phase!
This is exciting! ^w^

And thanks for the nice comments! <3

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 6:57 am
by KiloTango
Those backgrounds are gorgeous! And great to hear the writing is going well :)

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 7:40 am
by MimirollCookie
This is really cute!!!

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 9:25 am
by Kowai
Well... For someone who rarely does background, you did great! ♥ And since it matches the sprites so well, you can tell yourself that mission is accomplished for that one.

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 4:37 pm
by Zelan
Like Kowai said, the backgrounds fit with the cute style and theme well. Besides, I've always thought that sprites are more important than the backgrounds (since that's what we're looking at), so as long as the backgrounds are halfway decent you're good to go. ^_^ I would call yours more than decent, though - they're simple but serene-looking. c:

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2016 8:05 pm
by Candy☆Giants
Oh, wow. The art style is so lovely, it gives me warm and fuzzly feels! :'D

Definitely gonna play this when it's out.

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2016 4:54 am
by Mandy
!~UPDATE~!

Hey!

I just wanted to let everyone know that Momo and I have decided to make Starlit Flowers a Kinetic Visual Novel. Meaning, there will only be one ending and there will be no choices.
We expect the finished script to be around 18-20k words long.

Thanks for all your support! ^^

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2016 6:04 am
by momo
Ahhh thank you so much everyone!! I was expecting far too much from myself and I tend to be too critical of my own work but I'm glad you guys liked those BGs!! I finished the second forest background and it looks a lot nicer than the one I posted yesterday but... somehow ended up in a completely different style? I dunno haha, it just kinda happened. But I'm super pleased with how it turned out and we've decided to scrap the previous one and just use this one.

EDIT: Fixed the colours and values a bit.

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Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:29 am
by Hi.In.Ni
This looks so good. It looks profesional. I'm amazed, it's so good

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:24 pm
by momo
@Hi.In.Ni Thank you!!! :')

Finished another background!! I'm having a much easier time with the BGs now that I've figured out the style :'D

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Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2016 1:15 am
by Mandy
The first draft for the script is finished! It stands at 17k.
I'll start the editing/rewriting phase on Monday~! :3

Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:08 am
by momo
3 down, 4 more to go!! '-')9

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Re: Starlit Flowers [GxG] [Slice of Life | Fantasy] [NaNo16]

Posted: Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:26 pm
by Zelan
Oh my gosh, that rain effect for the cave background is perfect. <3 I like the style that you're using for these backgrounds!