Where We Lay Our Scene [NaNoRenO 2016] [Commercial]

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#31 Post by KiloTango » Tue Mar 08, 2016 7:40 am

I love Sasha's lingerie and her headscarf, girl has style! (Makes me wanna try and pull off that hair style myself... is it a high pony tucked back into the scarf at the bottom?)

Oliver looks like he's going to be a cutie and I enjoy how unsure Reiner looks about this whole having neat hair thing (also digging that he is a proper hairy bloke, that's not done enough!)
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#32 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Tue Mar 08, 2016 10:57 am

@KiloTango, Thank you! I'm glad you like them ^_^ Sacha pins her hair up when working out of habit and keeps it in place with the scarf. I was inspired by the French chef in 100 Foot Journey, I really liked the hairstyle and wished I could do it too XD Reactions to Rainier have been pretty funny, pretty much amounting to "Body Hair??? Body Hair!!!!!" He was fun to do and I thought it suited his character.

Got a start on Oliver so I'll finish him off tomorrow night. I've promised myself an 8 hour sleep on Thursday, I'm looking forward to it :'D

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#33 Post by Lesleigh63 » Tue Mar 08, 2016 10:18 pm

I think Oliver is my favourite (I love the male torso - one of my favourite things to paint!).

Nice work on Sacha's sprite as well.
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#34 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Wed Mar 09, 2016 7:38 am

@Lesleigh, ah, I love painting it too! The muscles and forms are really fun to do~And thank you :)

Oliver base is done. I'm half tempted to just leave everyone in their underwear but no, next step is giving everyone outfits properly! I've also been making a lot of micro edits as I go. It's going to be hard to hand them over, I always find things I could do better :'D

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#35 Post by Camille » Thu Mar 10, 2016 5:45 am

Just an update to say that I finished writing the common route Tuesday night and I'm full speed ahead on Viola's route now. I'll spend about 3-5 days writing each of the four routes. Right now the order is looking to be Viola -> Rainier -> Sacha -> Oliver. When the sprites and BGs are done, I'll start coding them in. Coding is very tedious but easy work, whereas writing is...y'know, {i}creation{/i}, which takes me a lot longer.

I've got a much steadier pace going for the writing compared to previous years, which is good. I'd really like to avoid having a bunch of expression coding to do right at the end because experience reminds me that that really sucks. :'D
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#36 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Thu Mar 10, 2016 10:08 am

Started on Viola first since she needed a fair bit of editing (and I'm avoiding Christian).

We are going to try and do shirtless scenes for the girls too and please appreciate the details that will never get seen in game :'D

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#37 Post by Lesleigh63 » Thu Mar 10, 2016 9:19 pm

That left arm's looking good now, Auro.

I love her clothes and the colours you're using.
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#38 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Fri Mar 11, 2016 11:08 am

@Lesleigh, Thank you for the advice, it was very helpful! :) And I'm glad ^_^ Since she's an ex-model she would have to be very fashionable so I'm relieved that she looks okay hahaha

I only got one outfit done tonight since I had to travel to see family, but I'm going to do my best to crunch through them this weekend!

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#39 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Fri Mar 11, 2016 9:04 pm

Welp 1 done, only 4 more to go :'D

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#40 Post by Zelan » Fri Mar 11, 2016 10:41 pm

Man, it's projects like these that make me wish I had my own money. cx I've loved all of the other Cyanide Tea visual novels I've played (I think the only free one I haven't is Nachitgal?) so this one will probably be great as usual ^_^

Super digging Viola's clothes, by the way, especially that dress on the right. Her hairstyles are great, too - I like how her hair is subtly lighter near the bottom.

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#41 Post by Lesleigh63 » Fri Mar 11, 2016 11:03 pm

Viola's clothes are looking great. Love the little kick in the skirt.
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#42 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Sat Mar 12, 2016 10:17 am

@Zelan, Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear you are liking the look of everything and that you enjoyed some of our previous games :) The outfit on the end was inspired by one from The Devil Wears Prada, I love that movie! I'm going a little overboard with the details but it's nice to hear it's appreciated ^_^

@Lesleigh, Thank you! I'm trying hard to make sure the outfits are both practical for the game and that they help say something about the characters themselves.

This style is proving to be extremely time consuming, even though I spent nearly ALL day on these, this is as far as I got -.- I haven't had time to post on the other super awesome Nano threads either so ganbatte fellow devs, ganbatte.

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#43 Post by Lesleigh63 » Sun Mar 13, 2016 12:47 am

He definitely looks like a model.
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#44 Post by Hi.In.Ni » Sun Mar 13, 2016 6:34 am

How did this go under my radar!! This looks so good and so far is super interesting!!
I like the art too, it's not my cup of tea but yet so charming!!
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#45 Post by Camille » Sun Mar 13, 2016 6:41 am

A preview of some of the writing in the first scene if anyone's interested~ Featuring Christian, of course, as well as Rainier and Oliver. Let me know what you think! *_*
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