Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#211 Post by RamRam »

I played it and the overall theme which is sweets IS really there! XD And it's so cute! :) Keep it up, Mimi! :)
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#212 Post by MimirollCookie »

Thanks RamRam! Good luck with Lifted Dreams!
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#213 Post by LeonDaydreamer »

Since I'm playing it I thought I might as well give proper feedback.

Nice credits intro, I was wondering what would be a good way to do credits for my own game. Was that a video or did you guys put it together in Ren'py?

I'm in general a little ambivalent about letting the player name the characters, because you can easily have a game play out with Horsehead269 speaking with CrapForBrains33 the entire time. Having said that, it is nice to play as myself. :) Though, also if I accidentally leave it blank then my name will be " " .

The voice acting is lovely! But I have to say, that really is an expensive cafe. :P

I noticed quite a few grammar errors, like "the customer said our pastries are over priced and doesn't taste good" ; "so where do I will work?"; and when Mina invites you to the "hill", I think her voice said "beach".

Overall, it's a sweet story. Nice job! :)
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#214 Post by MimirollCookie »

LeonDaydreamer wrote:Since I'm playing it I thought I might as well give proper feedback.

Nice credits intro, I was wondering what would be a good way to do credits for my own game. Was that a video or did you guys put it together in Ren'py?

I'm in general a little ambivalent about letting the player name the characters, because you can easily have a game play out with Horsehead269 speaking with CrapForBrains33 the entire time. Having said that, it is nice to play as myself. :) Though, also if I accidentally leave it blank then my name will be " " .

The voice acting is lovely! But I have to say, that really is an expensive cafe. :P

I noticed quite a few grammar errors, like "the customer said our pastries are over priced and doesn't taste good" ; "so where do I will work?"; and when Mina invites you to the "hill", I think her voice said "beach".

Overall, it's a sweet story. Nice job! :)
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I will release a Version 1.1 tomorrow! Thanks LeonDayDreamer!
Anyway the credit intro is a video. :)
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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#215 Post by alex.theoto »

The intro-credits was a video

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Re: Sweet and Spices (Drama)(Romance)(NaNo'16) COMPLETED!

#216 Post by MimirollCookie »

I see that many people replied here too.... ^_^;
Anyway if you guys have more replies please proceed to the complete games thread of Sweet and Spices. Thank you. :)
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