These are some of the mistakes I found. TBH I am not good in English but I hope it helps!!
Anyways Gambate with the game~~
Aww! You are right, I will fix them right away! The first one is meant to be that way(She assumes she wears so little because she gets hot easily) But I think "cold" would avoid further confusions on this.
Thank you so much for your time :A: as well for your good wishes !!
Hello guys :A: Sorry for the little updates here!
I bring good news! The second demo is out now!
I’ve been trying to polish this new demo the most I could so you could see a difference between the previous one and this new one. Things you might encounter in this new demo are:
Music! There are 9 original tracks which were commissioned for the game. You can see the composer’s page here.
The first and second chapters are mainly the same, so it’s up to you if you want to play them again. I would suggest you do since I added some things there according to the feedback I received from the first demo.
A lot of art. If you follow me on twitter you might know already haha. Even so, I apologize if you encounter placeholder art in some moment!
April is almost finished! So I want to remind everyone who was interested that the giveaway is closed tomorrow.
Also, there will be a revised version of the newer demo in May, thanks to everyone who summited typos and grammatical mistakes. If you encountered any, let me know please so I can check it for this revised version.
In May I will resume the development of the 3 remaining chapters. As I said before, chapter 5 is all written and chapter 6 is 70% written. I will probably start adding assets for chap 5 while I edit the script.