Little Magical Murderer [GxB/G][NaNo16]

[yetibutts]

SYNOPSIS
Student by day, dark magical girl by night.
As the daughter of the Big Bad, Kristi has always helped her dad out with his plans to take over the world. Ever since she was little, it's been a part of her nightly routine to come up with dastardly plans, fight other magical girls, destroy parts of the city, and other shenanigans. By now, as a college student, Kristi's pretty used to it.
One night, after finishing up with her dad, Kristi finds herself summoned into a classroom by a weird group of kids. They claim they were following a dare to perform a creepypasta ritual, to summon "the harbringer of doom". They certainly weren't expecting to summon anything at all, much less a normal-looking schoolgirl.
When Kristi finds out that they go to the same university as her, she's not sure if she's gotten herself into something potentially good or bad, especially since they keep pestering her to find out what exactly she is...


CHARACTERS
KRISTI CHIU

The protagonist. Deadpan and only talks when she needs to.

BEN WU

One of the students that summons Kristi. He's often seen with a cheery, gentle smile on his face, and laughs at almost everything. To Kristi, Ben is like one of those really fat but happy and content corgis.

FARU HASAN

One of the students. She's pretty loud and demanding, and makes jokes to pass off everything. Kristi finds that her food keeps disappearing whenever she's around Faru...

ALLISON NGO

A soft-spoken, really nice student. She's kind of touchy-feely and clingy when it comes to Kristi, and Kristi isn't sure why...?

KEVIN LEE
The student that came up with the creepypasta dare. Pretty silent, and has an intelligent air about him, but it turns out he's just (endearingly) dense. Kristi worries about his well-being sometimes...

PROGRESS
script: 0%
sprites: 3/9
BGs: (not sure if i'll make my own or use CC?) 0%
CGs: 0% (4?)
GUI: 0%
Music: (CC, prob leave in the last few days)

COMMENTS
First attempt at a solo VN, hahah. This story idea is from papillon, taken from the Ideas Dump thread!
What do you guys think of the premise and the characters?
Thanks for reading, and good luck to everyone else!

[Alcor]

I'm loving the concept, haha! I'm definitely eager to see how you develop it. Also, I've been stalking admiring your art for quite a while and I'm really excited to see you create a project! The character concepts looks amazing. (I also may have a soft spot for deadpan characters because the way they interact with other characters is just so entertaining :'D)

Best of luck with your project, and highfive from another solo NaNo person! I'll be keeping an eye on this ~

[Weenily]

The premise is really interesting! I love that you're on the dark side of magical girls and that your dad wants to take over the world! The characters sound adorable ugh <3 and the art is really cute! I love the option of GxB or GxG. I like Kevin, Allison, and Kristi the best so far! I'm really interested in Kristi's dad though haha. Good luck with your game!

[Shadow Wolfwind]

Sounds super cute! It will be interesting to see what you do with it.

[Amy_oai]

This sounds really interesting and I love the art! And evil magical girls sounds amazing.
Good luck!

[MimirollCookie]

It looks so cute! (Except the murderer part in the title hahaha :,D)
Good luck with your project! ^0^

[HusbandoGoddess]

First off, it's really cool to see a MAIN CHARACTER WITH THE SAME NAME AS YOU! (Kristi is such a rare name, especially with that spelling. :'D)

The art for the character looks cute, although with the title having the word murder in it I'm scared one of these adorable looking characters might...y'know, get the axe.

As for the premise, I like it! Being an evil magical girl who's trying to take over the world with her Dad? Sounds like an amazing 'Take your Daughter to Work' day to me! I'll be patiently waiting for future updates. Good luck!

[maedinn]

This is a cool concept! And a turn for magical girls being dark is definitely interesting. I can't wait to see how you'll do this

[nickynoton]

The premise of this seems very interesting and original. I really like the character art. Best of luck to you! I'm keeping my eye out for this!

[Seigetsu]

Evil magical girl helping her dad take over the world...and she's the protagonist!? That's a really nice spin to the magical girl concept, haha. I love the GxG option as well. I also like the ethnic diversity of your characters. Looking forward to seeing more! Best of wishes on your project.

[yetibutts]

Ahh thank you everyone for the well wishes and kind comments! ///

I haven't gotten much work done these past few days, but today I'm planning on doing some major work for the sprites; will update the main post as I go along! May or may not revamp the logo in an attempt to do some GUI.

[Elze]

Awwww the art is really cute, I love the character designs <3
Also, that logo is perf, SERIOUSLY.

The moment I read "As the daughter of the Big Bad" I knew I'd love the premise xD
Hnngg will wait to see more!

[Weenily]

Kristi is so adorable and I really love Ben's hair! The current logo already looks nice, but I hope you can find something that works with the GUI you come up with. o7o/

[Ghost of Crux]

The premise and the characters are super interesting, but the title definitely takes the cake. I love it.
And the logo is absolutely beautiful, I love it--

[laspis]

I love the concept and sprites I have a spot in my heart for deadpan protagonists. That title though lol