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Re: My art journey~

#61 Post by King-sama » Fri Jun 22, 2018 8:14 pm

dark hall - hospital.png
Working with this right now from a challenge on DA. I still need to add shadows, texture, etc.
I am so bored, tell me I did a good job lol jk. Critiques are welcome.

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Re: My art journey~

#62 Post by Zelan » Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:19 pm

Good to see you again, King-sama! :D I like the hospital background, it looks like something straight out of a horror novel. I wouldn't want to know what just happened in there! And I love the mushroom pictures, they look so pretty!

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Re: My art journey~

#63 Post by King-sama » Tue Jul 10, 2018 4:42 pm

Zelan wrote:
Fri Jun 22, 2018 10:19 pm
Good to see you again, King-sama! :D I like the hospital background, it looks like something straight out of a horror novel. I wouldn't want to know what just happened in there! And I love the mushroom pictures, they look so pretty!
Glad to see you again too, Zelan. (: I have never read a horror novel before but I wanted the background to have a scary feel to it as you could tell. Don't worry, you will never know what happened. Lol

Thanks for your comment.
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This is not finished //sigh because I keep procrastinating.

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Re: My art journey~

#64 Post by bosinpai » Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:26 pm

Hey King-sama,

The background textures are starting to feel nice ^^

I felt something was odd with the perspective. I did some quick lines and you can see I find some minor inconsistencies in the vanishing points, but the main one is the leftmost door (line in red) which is not aligned with the other left door (which make it seems they have a different height - I believe they need to be aligned on the blue line). The slanted wood texture is contributing to that feeling of incorrectness. Also I find that none of the doors are perfectly parallel with the center floor/middle door vertical line, in particular the left part of the leftmost door (taking the image rotation into account of course).
Last the door keyhole is too round, it looks like it's front-facing ; in perspective it would look like an ellipse. I made a quick suggestion on the left door :)
What do you think ?

PS: also it seems the light comes a bit out of nowhere, maybe you can make the halogens brighter?
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#65 Post by King-sama » Wed Jul 11, 2018 3:40 pm

bosinpai wrote:
Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:26 pm
Hey King-sama,

The background textures are starting to feel nice ^^

I felt something was odd with the perspective. I did some quick lines and you can see I find some minor inconsistencies in the vanishing points, but the main one is the leftmost door (line in red) which is not aligned with the other left door (which make it seems they have a different height - I believe they need to be aligned on the blue line). The slanted wood texture is contributing to that feeling of incorrectness. Also I find that none of the doors are perfectly parallel with the center floor/middle door vertical line, in particular the left part of the leftmost door (taking the image rotation into account of course).
Last the door keyhole is too round, it looks like it's front-facing ; in perspective it would look like an ellipse. I made a quick suggestion on the left door :)
What do you think ?

PS: also it seems the light comes a bit out of nowhere, maybe you can make the halogens brighter?
Hey bonsai, (Can I call you bonsai? I call you that in my head all the time lol)

Doing the textures was the most fun thing. (or the only fun thing..)

Yeah..., all these problems are there because I was lazy, hah. I didn't learn how to use Carapace properly to make it gives me more lines >>' And I was lazy to put a dot in the middle of the number 1
dark hall - hospital vanishing points.png
This is how it looks like with the Carapace thing. Big circle and no small dot.
dark hall - hospital my lines version.png
I did my own lines. That's how I did it like while lineart stage. (I did this but yeah, the not putting a dot problem was the reason why it's all went wrong).
dark hall - hospital no light.png
This is how it should look like in the end. It shouldn't have any light source and that was my problem, I didn't know how to shade without any light source so I shaded it like it has ^^'. Any suggestions on the no light source shading? How would you do it/imagine it?

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Re: My art journey~

#66 Post by bosinpai » Thu Jul 12, 2018 4:10 am

I'm not a bonsai, I'm a beautiful oak tree!

I didn't spot the "varying" ceiling height, sneaky mistake since the lines are right but the angle isn't!

Btw you might want to give the new Krita tool a try ;)
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I didn't really think on how to light an unlit place. Theoretically this would be completely black but there could be some lit emergency exit sign right above the door, or other low-energy emergency light sources.

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Re: My art journey~

#67 Post by King-sama » Mon Aug 13, 2018 4:36 pm

Thanks for the tips, Oak-senpai. You are helpful.

Gonna add this here for references. I am not the owner of the challenge.

100 Flavors Challenge:

1. Raspberry (Raspberry Lemon Cream Cup)
2. Apple (Caramel Apple Cider Floats)
3. Caramel (Caramel Starbucks)
4. Hazelnut (Hazelnut Brownies)
5. Rhubarb (Strawberry And Rhubarb Pie)
6. Miso (Miso Soup)
7. Redcurrant (Redcurrant Parfait)
8. Orange (Orange Juice)
9. Nougat (Nougat glace)
10. Coffee (Mocha)
11. Eucalyptus (eucalyptus-infused jelly/or ice cream)
12. Paprika (paprika and chorizo chicken dish)
13. Ketchup (french fries)
14. Cream ( pavlova dessert)
15. Bitter (lemon juice with mint)
16. Blueberry (blueberry muffin)
17. Cherry
18. Marzipan (marzipan cake)
19. Pistachio (pistachio ice cream/or macarons)
20. Passionfruit (panna cotta)
21. Pumpkin (pumpkin soup/pumpkin pie)
22. Thyme (succulent roasted chicken with thyme)
23. Fish (salmon sushis and rolls)
24. Chili ( Chicken curry)
25. Mustard (hotdog sandwich)
26. Coconut (Pina-Colada)
27. Liquorice ( liquorice allsorts sweets)
28. Peanut (baklava)
29. Soda (soda float)
30. Ginger (ginger preserves)
31. Plum (baked plums with cream)
32. Charcoal (grilled Shish Tawook in charcoal grill/ or burned food : P)
33. Carrot (Carrot cake)
34. Salty (salted caramel pudding)
35. Lime (lime ice pop)
36. Raisin (Christmas fruitcake with nuts and cherries)
37. Radish (crispy pink radishes on a toasted slice of country bread covered in salted butter)
38. Cheese (oreo cheesecake)
39. Savory (herb and cheese muffins)
40. Apricot (apricot jam)
41. Pepper (stuffed peppers)
42. Bread
43. Mango (fruit salad/passion fruit, pitahaya, rambutan, Kawano, starfruit, papaya, lychee, physalis )
44. Lingonberry (Grilled salmon and lingonberry fruits/sauce)
45. Onion (onion rings)
46. Tofu (pad thai)
47. Sweet (french pastry/Eclairs/Macarons/Chausson aux pommes)
48. Gooseberry (Gooseberry panna cota or pudding)
49. Avocado (Guacamole with nachos)
50. Wine ( blue lagoon cocktail)
51. Mushroom (pizza)
52. Almond ((Marzipan cake again~)
53. Olive (fêta and fresh olives salad)
54. Soy sauce (stir fry)
55. Banana
56. Vanilla (Vanilla panna cotta)
57. Chamomile (tea)
58. Spinach (Miang Kham)
59. Sour (Sweet And Sour duck with peppers and pineapple)
60. Peach (jello peach and cream/Peach Melba)
61. Peppermint
62. Honey (pancake/Honey and lemon crêpe)
63. Vinegar (vinegar chips and fish~)
64. Pineapple (pineapple upside down cake)
65. Milk (bubble tea)
66. Kiwi
67. Cloudberry (cloudberry soufflé)
68. Cashew (Chicken cashew stir-fry)
69. Cucumber (cucumber soup)
70. Rotten (Gorgonzola cheese)
71. Persimmon ( chocolate pie persimmon)
72. Parsnip (Honey roasted parsnips)
73. Saffron (paella/milk )
74. Meat (spaghetti/Chaliapin steak)
75. Grape (Different varieties of grapes)
76. Toffee (Quality Street box //I liked this one~)
77. Parsley (parsley with thin beef steaks, with salt and pepper)
78. Blackberry ( waffle or crepe)
79. Cactus (prickly pear sorbet)
80. Cocoa (molten cake)
81. Walnut ( waffles with walnuts on top/Nutella)
82. Tutti frutti (Fruit tartlets)
83. Curry (curry pasta)
84. Strawberry
85. Mandarin (Duck and mandarin sauce 'Canard à l'orange')
86. Chocolate
87. Buttery (religieuse)
88. Cinnamon (cinnamon cocktail/pumpkin cinnamon pie)
89. Wasabi ( maki with wasabi and ginger on the side)
90. Lemon
91. Cranberry (Turkey with chocolate sauce and cranberries)
92. Pecan (pecan cookies)
93. Garlic (Stuffed garlic mushrooms)
94. Melon (Melon and thin smoked ham)
95. Tea (cream tea? (tea with scones)/ Glass teapot with blooming flower tea)
96. Butterscotch ( Butterbeer from Harry Potter)
97. Bland (porridge)
98. Egg (Deviled Eggs)
99. Blackcurrant (blackcurrant pie)
100. Pear (pear-chocolate tart)

Also, is there a way I can change my username here?

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