Can Someone tell me what they think of my art?[closed]

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#1 Post by AshenhartKrie »

Yes, this is meant to be horrible. The game is a crack genre's mystery/romance game, so it's supposed to be.... crap.
But yes. What do you think?
It's going to be the background for the main menu... if I can figure out how to put an image as the background. TT^TT
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#2 Post by Hijiri »

AshenhartKrie wrote:Yes, this is meant to be horrible. The game is a crack genre's mystery/romance game, so it's supposed to be.... crap.
But yes. What do you think?
It's going to be the background for the main menu... if I can figure out how to put an image as the background. TT^TT
I was about to call you a troll from seeing the image, but when I read what you posted...yeah. Good job on that at least.

Also, adding images to main menu is east. Just go to options.rpy and find this line:

Code: Select all

        ## The background of the main menu. This can be a color
        ## beginning with '#', or an image filename. The latter
        ## should take up the full height and width of the screen.
        mm_root = "yourimagename.png",
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Hijiri wrote:
AshenhartKrie wrote:Yes, this is meant to be horrible. The game is a crack genre's mystery/romance game, so it's supposed to be.... crap.
But yes. What do you think?
It's going to be the background for the main menu... if I can figure out how to put an image as the background. TT^TT
I was about to call you a troll from seeing the image, but when I read what you posted...yeah. Good job on that at least.

Also, adding images to main menu is east. Just go to options.rpy and find this line:

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        ## The background of the main menu. This can be a color
        ## beginning with '#', or an image filename. The latter
        ## should take up the full height and width of the screen.
        mm_root = "yourimagename.png",
Haha... yeah, I was in no way intending for that to be serious. Maybe later I'll do a serious one but meh. It was a five minute recess quickie lol.
And thank you. Now to navigate my evil script in notepad. the image goes in the game directory, right?

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#4 Post by michi 18 »

What application did you use to draw that? Judging from the art it seems like it was made from paint. IS it?
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#5 Post by AshenhartKrie »

Nah, I used CS5. I just didn't bother doing it properly.

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#6 Post by Daistarir »

@michi : Haha... Paint don't have that kind of smooth lineart. Except it's Paint.net

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#7 Post by Hijiri »

AshenhartKrie wrote: the image goes in the game directory, right?
yes it does
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#8 Post by AshenhartKrie »

cheers. I've actually done a proper artwork for it now lol.

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#9 Post by dramspringfeald »

Try Bolding the lines...

If you made them about 2 or 3 times thicker it would work. I'm not sure what the style is but it would be close to Peppa-Rapa.

I want to see you REALLY try cause that would be an interesting art style.... I'm not kidding.
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#10 Post by AshenhartKrie »

dramspringfeald wrote:Try Bolding the lines...

If you made them about 2 or 3 times thicker it would work. I'm not sure what the style is but it would be close to Peppa-Rapa.

I want to see you REALLY try cause that would be an interesting art style.... I'm not kidding.
Oooh I might do that. ^_^ I guess the hour and a half I put into drawing an awesome normal background went to waste.
This is going to be so much fun.

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#11 Post by michi 18 »

Daistarir : It can be possible you know.
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#12 Post by Daistarir »

michi 18 wrote:Daistarir : It can be possible you know.
If you are a fullbown artist.

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#13 Post by michi 18 »

And that is the IF.
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#14 Post by Daistarir »

And she isn't. Done.
I forgot the problem here.
Well, At least can you make the words look readable???
It's look funny. I will call this a color doodle.
Erase the excess line on the hair.
The rest is okay since it's crap.

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#15 Post by AshenhartKrie »

I AM actually good at art. I'm sorry, I took offence to that statement about not being an artist. This was drawn in a satire fashion.
I can read the words perfectly. I didn't realise that no one else could. And it's meant to look funny.

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