Hi everyone!
I'm still new to digital art and I'm trying to improve myself. So can you comment something about this picture? Please also leave some tips as to how to improve my drawing.
Advices and critiques needed
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Re: Advices and critiques needed
it's better to see a full body so you can get a full critique but.... the arm is super thin, she should have muscles. Her face seems a tad too concave and her hair is pretty flat. Pretty eyes though
I have a lot of anatomy tutorials faved on my DA favorites that would be helpful if you'd like to sift through
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I have a lot of anatomy tutorials faved on my DA favorites that would be helpful if you'd like to sift through
buprettyinpink.deviantart.com
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Re: Advices and critiques needed
The arm looks a bit unproportional with the rest of her body. Also, I can't tell if it's just me but her eyes don't seem to exactly align with her face. Aside from that, the colors look fine to me
Re: Advices and critiques needed
Thanks for the feedback!
I didn't use any references for this drawing so that may be the reason why the arm is unproportional. I don't always draw the full body so it's kinda hard for me to draw the body of my character.
I didn't use any references for this drawing so that may be the reason why the arm is unproportional. I don't always draw the full body so it's kinda hard for me to draw the body of my character.
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