chocojax's Art Thread [Critique always appreciated!]
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [tips and critique appreciated!!]
Thanks for the reply, LWR!
I've been trying to think about how to go about separating the planes through the colors, and it's been difficult. (Mainly because one of my biggest weaknesses at the moment is color, haa)
I tried to make the foreground the most saturated > midground > background, although since the background is the sky, it'd be a nicer blue since it's the sky itself?
Thanks for the help and for the video! I was mainly lookin' around the color section but found the composition tag just now, so I'll have to look over those tomorrow.
Of course, here are some more updated WIPs.
and back-shadow vs front-shadow (her skin also makes for good focus)
I thought the second image would be more interesting to draw. I'll look at it again tomorrow to see which one's better to look at, I suppose.
I've been trying to think about how to go about separating the planes through the colors, and it's been difficult. (Mainly because one of my biggest weaknesses at the moment is color, haa)
I tried to make the foreground the most saturated > midground > background, although since the background is the sky, it'd be a nicer blue since it's the sky itself?
Thanks for the help and for the video! I was mainly lookin' around the color section but found the composition tag just now, so I'll have to look over those tomorrow.
Of course, here are some more updated WIPs.
and back-shadow vs front-shadow (her skin also makes for good focus)
I thought the second image would be more interesting to draw. I'll look at it again tomorrow to see which one's better to look at, I suppose.
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [tips and critique appreciated!!]
The third image could work really well with a strong light source in the top left corner of the image and some rim lighting on the rock and figure. You might have to employ some bounce lighting from the ground to keep the core shadow from being too dark, but it could be a very dramatic composition.
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [tips and critique appreciated!!]
As you can probably tell from the lack of updates, I abandoned that picture, hah. Thanks a lot for your help though, LWR!
Here, have some self-portraits I drew for art class. The one on far left was worked on too much for my tastes, but I was given 2 1/2 hours on it in class, and didn't want to just laze around or start on another one, so.
Here, have some self-portraits I drew for art class. The one on far left was worked on too much for my tastes, but I was given 2 1/2 hours on it in class, and didn't want to just laze around or start on another one, so.
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [tips and critique appreciated!!]
Wow, those are great! You have a good range of styles!
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [tips and critique appreciated!!]
jhercbnaerkuxhb!
*your still my arting god*
So pretty!
I'm sorry, I have no crit *doesn't feel qualified to crit XD*
*your still my arting god*
So pretty!
I'm sorry, I have no crit *doesn't feel qualified to crit XD*
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [STREAM:ONLINE]
(Haha, thanks for the comments, you guys. :P)
Streaming, drawing stuff for VN tycoon.
offline! thanks to everyone who watched!
http://livestream.com/ch556
offline! thanks to everyone who watched!
http://livestream.com/ch556
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [STREAM:offline]
Since NaNoReno is finally over, I'd like to do some requests for people!
I will only complete requests for people who completed their NaNoRenO 2014 game.
Applies for people who completed their NaNoRenO game past the deadline! Gogogo!
List will be ordered by, and requests will be done by the time and date the game was completed!
I will also stop doing requests when I get tired/busy, so please don't get upset/angry if I stop before I get to you!
I like messin' around with styles, but most likely, I'll draw something like this:
LIST OF REQUESTS
1. The Mishka Effect!!!!!!!!
2. Six Rules!!!!!!!! (not nano)
I will only complete requests for people who completed their NaNoRenO 2014 game.
Applies for people who completed their NaNoRenO game past the deadline! Gogogo!
List will be ordered by, and requests will be done by the time and date the game was completed!
I will also stop doing requests when I get tired/busy, so please don't get upset/angry if I stop before I get to you!
I like messin' around with styles, but most likely, I'll draw something like this:
LIST OF REQUESTS
2. Six Rules!!!!!!!! (not nano)
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
^ she's really cute! I just want to pinch her cheeks. Congrats on getting Visual Novel Tycoon out!
Oh can I request anyone from "The Mishka Effect?" http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=25941
Oh can I request anyone from "The Mishka Effect?" http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=25941
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
Thanks, man. Congrats to you as well!
Hope 'ya like it.
Hope 'ya like it.
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
This is so awesome! O: Unfortunately I didn't do ReNO this year... I guess Six Rules doesn't count? Hahaha.
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
aslkj asodfi alkjg oaasjf!!! This is really amazing!!! I wasn't expecting you to draw everyone plus the chair. Bizzaro's pose and expression xD...coworkers really handsome here... and I really like how you did park ranger stuck in the void. Thanks so much for drawing this. I was happy to complete Nano but this is like the icing on top of the Nano cake
Do you mind if I post this in the dev thread and maybe another site? Can link back to your site if you like?
Do you mind if I post this in the dev thread and maybe another site? Can link back to your site if you like?
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
@Coren: Haha, thanks! Well, I'm planning on leaving this up for a week or so, but I'll put it at the end of the list. (I'll probably be able to get to it, since it seems like not a lot of nano'ers want to request, or they just haven't finished yet.)
@Duskylli: No problem, man! Bizzaro was the cutest one in my opinion, just a little bit... strange. :P
Nah, go ahead and post it anywhere. If you wanna link it, do it for chocojax.spacenote.net.
(Oh wow, I just realized that your username was Duskylli, not Duskylili. '3'...)
@Duskylli: No problem, man! Bizzaro was the cutest one in my opinion, just a little bit... strange. :P
Nah, go ahead and post it anywhere. If you wanna link it, do it for chocojax.spacenote.net.
(Oh wow, I just realized that your username was Duskylli, not Duskylili. '3'...)
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
WOW, CHOCOJAX THAT IS AWESOME!!!! Straight-up capslocking AWESOME. I assume what you said to Dusky applies to me, too, what with the linking permission and all. Thank you, thank you, this is the most awesome thing, wow...
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests for nanoreno!]
I shall request the pretty arts when my NaNo is out late as ever-- ;o;
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Re: chocojax's Art Thread [Requests closed]
Gonna close requests since I should be focusing on makin' stuff for that one VN I'm working on. ):
(I will get to Coren's request, though. Maybe sometime this week!)
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So that this post won't just be a two-liner, here's a background I've been working on. Still gotta add in a few things like books in that bookshelf, but for the moment, I'll take a break and work on something else. '3'
(I will get to Coren's request, though. Maybe sometime this week!)
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So that this post won't just be a two-liner, here's a background I've been working on. Still gotta add in a few things like books in that bookshelf, but for the moment, I'll take a break and work on something else. '3'
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