Roz's Art Dump [accepting critiques]

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Re: What can I do to make my art more professional?

#46 Post by Didules »

PhoenixStardust wrote: For Didules~
When I realize I hadn't seen it until now: :shock:
It's amazing, I especially love the composition! And you're the first one to actually draw the lil' faery (who is really beautiful on your drawing!) (I don't see what "mess" you are talking about :lol: Seriously, it looks more like a nice composition with every character ^^=
The color you used are truly beautiful!
Thanks a thousand times :D

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Re: Roz's Art Dump [accepting critiques]

#47 Post by Rozume »

@Didules

I'm glad you like it. :D

I was practicing my color theory skills using a limited (and somewhat unappealing) palette. It required A LOT of blending and such.
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I like the result so far. All though the hair is a little flat.

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Re: Roz's Art Dump [accepting critiques]

#48 Post by Rozume »

U-U-U-UPDATE!

I haven't updated this thread in 5ever, and my art has improved a lot since then. There are still some flaws though, and I'm still looking for critiques.
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Re: Roz's Art Dump [accepting critiques]

#49 Post by MaiMai »

Keep up the good work Rozume. It looks like you're doing a lot of experimenting and that's good.

The third picture is the one I take issue with, not necessarily because of the anatomy, but because of the position of the girl's right leg/foot. The standing position isn't quite natural with it facing the opposite way, unless you were going for a ballet position. I drew over your pic to show an alternate way to draw the right leg.
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#50 Post by Rozume »

@MaiMai

Thanks for the tip!
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#51 Post by Rozume »

Finally got to *a* request \o/
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Kaison from Crimson Rafflesia

As you can see, I'm experimenting with my style. Not sure if I like the result or not.

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Re: Roz's Art Dump [accepting critiques]

#52 Post by Tracy Bullet »

Wow is it cool to be able to see how an artist's style and abilities changed over time

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