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Sprite?

#1 Post by peppermintdragon »

Just signed up here. Renpy user starter.

Posting my art here for more improvement to make Character sprite~ And yes, making a Visual novel game.


Just finished this sprite moment ago. @_@' My first offical Sprite ~~

And yes, actually which sprite do u guys prefer ? THe thin outline or the thick outline sprite?@_@ I have problem choosing it.
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I hope it looks ok for the game...
I hope it looks ok for the game...

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#2 Post by silverpikachu99 »

Hi :) I personally prefer the second one.
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#3 Post by peppermintdragon »

Ooh Thanks! >W< THe second sprite was my second sprite ~~ It looks more completed, but i somehow dont like the lines...^^;
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OH! I finally know how to do the screenshot for renpy! This is the preview for both sprite~~~
OH! I finally know how to do the screenshot for renpy! This is the preview for both sprite~~~

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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

#4 Post by peppermintdragon »

Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

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Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???

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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

#5 Post by silverpikachu99 »

peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

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Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
Yup :) You've improved a lot! Congrats~
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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

#6 Post by peppermintdragon »

silverpikachu99 wrote:
peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

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Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
Yup :) You've improved a lot! Congrats~
thank you so much !!>W< i will try better next time !:)
My WIP project: Hallow Mystery.
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#7 Post by peppermintdragon »

WIP :) new style~ Character are based on a friend reference :D
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Re: Sprite?

#8 Post by SundownKid »

I think you could practice a couple things in your art, 1) making more detailed shading, and 2) making the poses less rigid/more varied (probably by using pose references).

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