Sprite?
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Sprite?
Just signed up here. Renpy user starter.
Posting my art here for more improvement to make Character sprite~ And yes, making a Visual novel game.
Just finished this sprite moment ago. @_@' My first offical Sprite ~~
And yes, actually which sprite do u guys prefer ? THe thin outline or the thick outline sprite?@_@ I have problem choosing it.
Posting my art here for more improvement to make Character sprite~ And yes, making a Visual novel game.
Just finished this sprite moment ago. @_@' My first offical Sprite ~~
And yes, actually which sprite do u guys prefer ? THe thin outline or the thick outline sprite?@_@ I have problem choosing it.
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Re: Sprite?
Ooh Thanks! >W< THe second sprite was my second sprite ~~ It looks more completed, but i somehow dont like the lines...^^;
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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique
Here's an update for my VN sprite !
Tell me what u think ! Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
Tell me what u think ! Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique
Yup You've improved a lot! Congrats~peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite !
Tell me what u think ! Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
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Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique
thank you so much !!>W< i will try better next time !:)silverpikachu99 wrote:Yup You've improved a lot! Congrats~peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite !
Tell me what u think ! Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
My WIP project: Hallow Mystery.
Check it out!
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=26120
Check it out!
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=26120
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Re: Sprite?
WIP new style~ Character are based on a friend reference
My WIP project: Hallow Mystery.
Check it out!
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=26120
Check it out!
http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 16&t=26120
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Re: Sprite?
I think you could practice a couple things in your art, 1) making more detailed shading, and 2) making the poses less rigid/more varied (probably by using pose references).
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