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Sprite?

Posted: Thu Dec 19, 2013 6:21 am
by peppermintdragon
Just signed up here. Renpy user starter.

Posting my art here for more improvement to make Character sprite~ And yes, making a Visual novel game.


Just finished this sprite moment ago. @_@' My first offical Sprite ~~

And yes, actually which sprite do u guys prefer ? THe thin outline or the thick outline sprite?@_@ I have problem choosing it.

Re: Sprite?

Posted: Mon Dec 23, 2013 5:22 pm
by silverpikachu99
Hi :) I personally prefer the second one.

Re: Sprite?

Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2013 4:09 am
by peppermintdragon
Ooh Thanks! >W< THe second sprite was my second sprite ~~ It looks more completed, but i somehow dont like the lines...^^;

Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:55 pm
by peppermintdragon
Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

Image

Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???

Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 3:38 pm
by silverpikachu99
peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

Image

Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
Yup :) You've improved a lot! Congrats~

Re: Sprite? Plz give some critique

Posted: Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:50 pm
by peppermintdragon
silverpikachu99 wrote:
peppermintdragon wrote:Here's an update for my VN sprite ! :D

Image

Tell me what u think ! :D Does it looks better than previous VN sprite???
Yup :) You've improved a lot! Congrats~
thank you so much !!>W< i will try better next time !:)

Re: Sprite?

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:20 am
by peppermintdragon
WIP :) new style~ Character are based on a friend reference :D

Re: Sprite?

Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:41 am
by SundownKid
I think you could practice a couple things in your art, 1) making more detailed shading, and 2) making the poses less rigid/more varied (probably by using pose references).