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#31 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:40 pm

Another drawing, a sketch this time :
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#32 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:46 pm

Hello guys, finally decided to color an old drawing :
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Wanted to try something a bit different with only gray variations.

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#33 Post by chocojax » Sun Mar 16, 2014 8:00 pm

There was this artist who drew extremely strange drawings with millions of lines that made me feel uncomfortable. I really wish I could show it to you, but I don't remember his name at the moment. If I ever find him again, I'll definitely show you, since it seems like something you might be interested in! (Based on your most recent drawing, haha.)

(I know you said this was an old drawing, but:)

I don't really know how to critique this, but I would suggest making it asymmetrical. That would definitely make it look more disturbing, in my opinion.

Also, having some sort of pattern/something at the very bottom of the page would be interesting too! So that you could frame the face, maybe?

In terms of shading, it needs some more contrast, to make it more dimensional? Having the "background" be much more darker would pull out the figure a lot more.

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#34 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sun Mar 23, 2014 12:22 pm

Hello guys, here are some stuffs :

- Felt like quickly re-drawing some old drawings I made like 8 months ago to compare my skills :
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And some doodles :
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Choco : well, it's not like it's THAT old anyway. Didn't try to make it asymmetrical, but I'll certainly make ones like that later.
And you think there isn't enough contrast ? The whole thing or just a part of it ?

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#35 Post by chocojax » Mon Mar 24, 2014 4:42 am

Tips on the eyes, which hopefully will be helpful:
- Something I like to do is add a sort of bar to the sphere to help me determine how slanted the eyes are, as well as the direction of the eye.
- A section of the eyelid tends to go upward when the pupil is in that area.
- I always saw the pupil as a sort of cut in the sphere. A much more exaggerated example is a cat's eye.
I'm still not too great at drawing eyes, but hopefully this helps too. '3'

As for the contrast thing, uhh, the whole thing, I suppose. If you select the darkest shade on the face/subject, it only goes to about a quarter down the black/white scale. I'm not sure if this should still qualify since it's stylized, but eh, just my two cents.

Keep up the drawin' and studyin'!
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#36 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Wed Mar 26, 2014 9:16 am

chocojax : well, that's also how I make eyes, tough I didn't think about adding a bar, I'll try that, thanks.

Besides that, some stuffs :

- Another two quick "remakes", not really useful but I gotta admit it's quite fun :
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And something a lil' bigger, a bunch of OC from a one of my stories I wanted to redraw in group :
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#37 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Tue Apr 01, 2014 1:55 pm

Happy April's fool day Image
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#38 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sun Apr 13, 2014 3:37 pm

Some new stuffs :

Wanted to try drawing some *cough* female anatomy *cough-*
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A fanart crossover, because those two really pisses me off :
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And a portrait :
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#39 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Thu Apr 17, 2014 4:22 pm

Some little stuffs :
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Random little fanart of Konan from Naruto.
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Lots of random doodles.
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Some sketchs for two OC's of mine.

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#40 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Mon Apr 21, 2014 12:26 pm

Another fanart of Onepunch Man :3
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#41 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sat May 03, 2014 2:16 pm

Some new stuffs :

Doodles (fanarts of OnePunch man and Mob Psycho 100) :
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A little portrait :
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And some anatomical tests using references :
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#42 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Tue May 06, 2014 7:19 pm

Moar stuff :
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Random fanarts of FT's chars.
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#43 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Fri May 09, 2014 5:35 pm

Sketch fanart of Leeron from Gurren lagann :
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#44 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Sat May 10, 2014 5:19 pm

A project I'm working on, here is the sketch I more or less finished today :
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#45 Post by TheGuraGuraMan » Wed May 14, 2014 5:10 pm

And here is the final version :3
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