Rinima's Art thread

[MaiMai]

It's getting there. Pay attention to how you're drawing the breasts (if they're small they shouldn't hang THAT low, it looks like they're practically on her stomach) and pay attention to feet. The latter looks a little like an afterthought.

[Rinima]

It's getting there. Pay attention to how you're drawing the breasts (if they're small they shouldn't hang THAT low, it looks like they're practically on her stomach) and pay attention to feet. The latter looks a little like an afterthought.

Okay, so make breasts higher, and fix feet!

[Armee]

Better than the old one for sure :3 But there are still something a bit off.
I can't outline because I don't have the proper console in my hand but anyway uvu;;
I don't really know how to explain but here we go. About the legs first, if you measure it, you will see the legs are unequal, other than that, the right leg look a bit uhm...let's say that the length for highest part to the knee equal the length from the lower part to the feet. I'm not sure that's right. ( e u e ;; Iw ain't paying attention when I write this, MaiMai already points it out )
I think the breasts should be higher too, e v e unless you want to draw oldies. I don't think oldies's breasts are that low, you should check references Try this here
http://nuei.deviantart.com/art/The-Easy ... -343813936
http://blacky91.deviantart.com/art/How- ... -360325508
And that hand pose, I tried to see if it's possible to do it casually o u o well, it's not haha. The lower part left arm have to be at least visible (and it suppose to fall down at the butt?) for the right arm the hold the ankle part.
Anyway, keep practicing and improving o u o d

[Rinima]

Oh, I didn't even see the leg problem >.<
Thanks for pointing that out

And thanks for the links!

[Rinima]

Apart from the hands and wrists (holy s*** they are -bad-), I think the anatomy is pretty much there?
Maybe the bottom of the legs are to long?

Also, HAIR! XD

[Rinima]

Colour~

[King-sama]

I just wanted to show you my attempt of coloring this~ X]

[Rinima]

I just wanted to show you my attempt of coloring this~ X]

Oh my goodness late reply is late ;~;
This is awesome! You make her look so much better *this dips**t can not shade XD (I'm talking about me if it's not obvious)*

Also, I drew! *finally*

[Rinima]

EDIT

Decided to make a sprite out of it.

[Rinima]

Doodling~

Miku is doing the chicken dance XD

[Rinima]

Would this be usable as a sprite?
Also, any anatomy changes needed?

[MaiMai]

The pose doesn't look very natural although maybe that could be fixed by having the other hand on her hip instead of being behind her back. And I think you need to fix the left side of her face (I know it's being covered by hair, but it makes her face seem very squished as a result.)

[Rinima]

Thanks
Do you think that I could put the showing hand on her hip and that would fix the problem with how the pose looks?

EDIT:
This look better?

[MaiMai]

Yeah, if you have the right hand on her hip that would look better, but don't cheat with the left arm. It can be hanging down, but you should make some indication it's there instead of letting it hide behind her back.

[Rinima]

Could I have her holding something *coughabombcough*?