Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
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Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
Hey guys, I'm still having some anatomical issues orz and I really really don't want to detract from a horror game experience with poor anatomical structure or funny-looking art. So if anyone could help point out the errors I have in the sketches below, that would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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Re: Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
Ok,why am I trying to help and redline stuff at 2 am??
I didn't notice that many mistakes on the first one:
I'd say the head was positioned a bit too much to the left, the shoulder proportions were a little off and her left arm looked a little too thin so I tried redlining those^^' (also I moved her head, but you can probably see that) And then I ended up redlining her entire upper body...so yeah. I hope this helps somehow c:
I didn't notice that many mistakes on the first one:
I'd say the head was positioned a bit too much to the left, the shoulder proportions were a little off and her left arm looked a little too thin so I tried redlining those^^' (also I moved her head, but you can probably see that) And then I ended up redlining her entire upper body...so yeah. I hope this helps somehow c:
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Thanks so much Nekomiira! And sorry for keeping you up this late into the night, heh. Greatly appreciated!
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Anyway this is my first time red lining something so I hope this helps.
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Re: Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
@Coren You're welcome^^ I redlined the third one too, you seemed to have problems with her hands. (This was done more quickly, but I hope this will help you)
Re: Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
I tried to do the girls, hope it helps :>
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Re: Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
You should see my arms ._.khnachi wrote:I tried...I just think that there arms are a bit too long.
I'm not seeing as much as others have pointed out. Hands seems a bit small and keep an eye on the feet. That's all I can point out.
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Re: Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!
Thanks a bunch, guys, it really helps.
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