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Are these sprites good?

#1 Post by Sleipnir56 »

A friend customized these for me. Do you think they're any good?

Here's Yusuke


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Here's Minato


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#2 Post by MaiMai »

Depends on what you mean by "good." There's professional "good" and "good enough that it isn't an eyesore."

They anatomy is stylized, but serviceable, the coloring is neat, the lineart isn't messy. I'd say it's fine.
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#3 Post by Sleipnir56 »

MaiMai wrote:Depends on what you mean by "good." There's professional "good" and "good enough that it isn't an eyesore."

They anatomy is stylized, but serviceable, the coloring is neat, the lineart isn't messy. I'd say it's fine.

Thank you. I don't know if they're professional, but that would matter cause they're being used in a free game. I'm really glad you think they're okay though. Thanks again

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#4 Post by Juneberry »

'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder'. While I personally find them quite nice, it probably would depend on the game and such. But personally, I like the style plenty.

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#5 Post by DeletedUser160413 »

I like the hair, I like the face. The shading looks nice and the clothes look good. I'd say that it looks quite good actually.

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#6 Post by Sleipnir56 »

Juneberry wrote:'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder'. While I personally find them quite nice, it probably would depend on the game and such. But personally, I like the style plenty.

You're right. It would depend on the game, and what I do for them. Thanks your opinion and I'm glad you thin they're nice

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#7 Post by Sleipnir56 »

muniiam wrote:I like the hair, I like the face. The shading looks nice and the clothes look good. I'd say that it looks quite good actually.

Thanks :) . Don't think these would work for commercial use, but I like making games for free so it doesn't matter.

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#8 Post by DeletedUser160413 »

I think they could work commercially, but I would suggest that you work a little more on the anatomy.

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#9 Post by Sleipnir56 »

muniiam wrote:I think they could work commercially, but I would suggest that you work a little more on the anatomy.
Do you mean their posture? I would change that, but they were customized. I sadly didn't draw them. But if it like the hair or close, that might be changeable

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#10 Post by Coren »

Looks really good to me! :)

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#11 Post by Sleipnir56 »

Coren wrote:Looks really good to me! :)
That means a lot to me Coren since I've seen a lot of your stuff and you're very talented. Though I didn't draw them, I did help customized them, so I really appreciate what you said. Thanks so much :mrgreen:

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