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Vennete
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by Vennete » Sat Jan 31, 2015 12:22 pm
Their are times where I get it, and time that I don't. Up to this point, *simple* Cell shading is something I have quite a difficulty in

I need some advice from line - art all the way to the coloring. The skin was an attempt of something I learned that I wanted to try

It would do me a lot of help if you also color and line-art it. I can learn a lot looking at a final product and maybe the process its been done

I'm a mouse user btw and I use paint tool sai.
* I cant upload more than 800X px and currently I'm quite lazy to resize it
My attempt
http://oi62.tinypic.com/5lbhqf.jpg
This is the sketch
http://oi60.tinypic.com/o90az4.jpg
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ZennyZenZen
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by ZennyZenZen » Wed Feb 04, 2015 11:32 am
It actually looks great. You're worried about nothing. You're on the right track, just keep coloring and shading like that.
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SundownKid
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by SundownKid » Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:38 pm
The shadow of the hair seems a little large. The neck also looks fully in shadow, I feel like it would have a non shadowed part somewhere.
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darkrchaos
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by darkrchaos » Fri Feb 06, 2015 6:57 pm
looks perfect to me

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King-sama
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by King-sama » Sat Feb 07, 2015 11:57 am
You can give it a gradient so it has more originality or "your own touch" to it
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Taleweaver
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by Taleweaver » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:37 am
Personal art goes into the Personal Art Threads forum.
Moved.
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