How can I color this right?

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How can I color this right?

#1 Post by Vennete » Sat Jan 31, 2015 12:22 pm

Their are times where I get it, and time that I don't. Up to this point, *simple* Cell shading is something I have quite a difficulty in :lol: I need some advice from line - art all the way to the coloring. The skin was an attempt of something I learned that I wanted to try :lol: It would do me a lot of help if you also color and line-art it. I can learn a lot looking at a final product and maybe the process its been done :D I'm a mouse user btw and I use paint tool sai.

* I cant upload more than 800X px and currently I'm quite lazy to resize it :lol:
My attempt
http://oi62.tinypic.com/5lbhqf.jpg

This is the sketch :)
http://oi60.tinypic.com/o90az4.jpg

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Re: How can I color this right?

#2 Post by ZennyZenZen » Wed Feb 04, 2015 11:32 am

It actually looks great. You're worried about nothing. You're on the right track, just keep coloring and shading like that.

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Re: How can I color this right?

#3 Post by SundownKid » Wed Feb 04, 2015 1:38 pm

The shadow of the hair seems a little large. The neck also looks fully in shadow, I feel like it would have a non shadowed part somewhere.

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#4 Post by darkrchaos » Fri Feb 06, 2015 6:57 pm

looks perfect to me :D

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Re: How can I color this right?

#5 Post by King-sama » Sat Feb 07, 2015 11:57 am

You can give it a gradient so it has more originality or "your own touch" to it

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Re: How can I color this right?

#6 Post by Taleweaver » Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:37 am

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