Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
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Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
uestHi guys! I've been a long time follower of this forum so I decided to start posting. I mostly draw characters, but I've been working on backgrounds and trying to improve my graphic design so I can do UI too!
Critique is always appreciated.
And with that, here's some of my art. Some old, some new, some unfinished and all that. Thanks for checking out my art! I'll try to keep as updated as possible.
Critique is always appreciated.
And with that, here's some of my art. Some old, some new, some unfinished and all that. Thanks for checking out my art! I'll try to keep as updated as possible.
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Updated with some new art, and a new headline!
Requests are mostly done on an interested/feel like it basis, so please don't be offended if I don't do yours!
Requests are mostly done on an interested/feel like it basis, so please don't be offended if I don't do yours!
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I made a banner!
It should actually say "Dweeb VNs" probably... but "games" sounds nicer.
Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Hi. My friend's birthday is coming up towards the end of this month. And I'm trying to get multiple pieces of art for him from different people (seeing as I have NO talent when it comes to drawing). Anyways, I was wondering if you'd be interested in drawing a character for me.
This image harkens back to a project that's very near and dear to our hearts, and so I'd really appreciate it if you could draw a character similar to the one shown in the photo below. You don't have to copy everything, in fact, his posture and background are totally up to you, but it'd be nice if you could go with an overall "sad" theme to it all.
Really hope you're interested.
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid ... =1&theater
This image harkens back to a project that's very near and dear to our hearts, and so I'd really appreciate it if you could draw a character similar to the one shown in the photo below. You don't have to copy everything, in fact, his posture and background are totally up to you, but it'd be nice if you could go with an overall "sad" theme to it all.
Really hope you're interested.
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid ... =1&theater
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I'd like to request art of anyone from my games listed below! I love the style you're going for, but the greatest critique I could say is don't make your line art as sketchy or nail a more accurate style as it looks unfinished to my eyes currently. For example, the boy in the school uniforms face's lineart is light enough to do your coloring justice, but the uniform looks patchy and uneven.
Hope that was helpful!
Hope that was helpful!
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Hi! Can I have anyone from any of my games please? Thanks!
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You are style is adorable, I love that banner! ^-^ My only suggestion is that you could try to use more contrasting colors for shading, as in some pictures it looks like you are just going with a darker shade of the base color.
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Thank you for all the feedback everyone!
I did one of the characters from All The Pretty Flowers, by Hazel. I know its a lot sketchier than even the ones you said was sketchy, but I was trying to practice and everything... I hope you like it!
I did one of the characters from All The Pretty Flowers, by Hazel. I know its a lot sketchier than even the ones you said was sketchy, but I was trying to practice and everything... I hope you like it!
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Hey everyone! Thanks to everyone who looks at my art or comments. I'll get some more of the requests done!
I ended up doodling a character I made in Fantasy Life.
I ended up doodling a character I made in Fantasy Life.
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Re: Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]
Hi TheKiwi, I like your arts! The color you chose is nice
But I think it will be better if you clean the lineart and the base color
But I think it will be better if you clean the lineart and the base color
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Oh so sweet! I'll feature it in the thread if that okay with you?
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Thanks Linka! I do have to work on my cleanup skills in general. But I also find just sketching a scene out fun too.
And @Hazelbun, of course! I don't have any problem with that.
Here's a promo image I did for a VN I'm working on. I'll be posting in the WiP page soon but I want to have more to show before then.
And @Hazelbun, of course! I don't have any problem with that.
Here's a promo image I did for a VN I'm working on. I'll be posting in the WiP page soon but I want to have more to show before then.
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It's been a tough week...
And here's a character from Mica: Apoptosis!
And here's a character from Mica: Apoptosis!
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Thank you so much for drawing Mika!! The overall mood of the drawing is really nice!
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Background practice, UI practice and a stupid little doodle (Edited an old sprite a bit so the colors would match! I love when VNs have slight edits in the sprites depending on the bg). WHAT IS CONSISTENT ART.
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