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#1 Post by TheKiwi »

uestHi guys! I've been a long time follower of this forum so I decided to start posting. I mostly draw characters, but I've been working on backgrounds and trying to improve my graphic design so I can do UI too!

Critique is always appreciated.

And with that, here's some of my art. Some old, some new, some unfinished and all that.
Concept Art
Concept Art
Outfit Designs
Outfit Designs
Fanart, and a crop of a practice CG
Fanart, and a crop of a practice CG
A practice CG
A practice CG
Character Art
Character Art
Character Art
Character Art
A Starbound CG
A Starbound CG
A Starbound CG
A Starbound CG
Background WIP
Background WIP
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A face
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Thanks for checking out my art! I'll try to keep as updated as possible.

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#2 Post by TheKiwi »

Updated with some new art, and a new headline!

Requests are mostly done on an interested/feel like it basis, so please don't be offended if I don't do yours!

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#3 Post by TheKiwi »

I made a banner!
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It should actually say "Dweeb VNs" probably... but "games" sounds nicer.

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Hi. My friend's birthday is coming up towards the end of this month. And I'm trying to get multiple pieces of art for him from different people (seeing as I have NO talent when it comes to drawing). Anyways, I was wondering if you'd be interested in drawing a character for me.

This image harkens back to a project that's very near and dear to our hearts, and so I'd really appreciate it if you could draw a character similar to the one shown in the photo below. You don't have to copy everything, in fact, his posture and background are totally up to you, but it'd be nice if you could go with an overall "sad" theme to it all.

Really hope you're interested.

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#5 Post by Hazel-Bun »

I'd like to request art of anyone from my games listed below! I love the style you're going for, but the greatest critique I could say is don't make your line art as sketchy or nail a more accurate style as it looks unfinished to my eyes currently. For example, the boy in the school uniforms face's lineart is light enough to do your coloring justice, but the uniform looks patchy and uneven.

Hope that was helpful!
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#6 Post by Coren »

Hi! Can I have anyone from any of my games please? :) Thanks!

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#7 Post by CSV »

You are style is adorable, I love that banner! ^-^ My only suggestion is that you could try to use more contrasting colors for shading, as in some pictures it looks like you are just going with a darker shade of the base color.
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#8 Post by TheKiwi »

Thank you for all the feedback everyone!

I did one of the characters from All The Pretty Flowers, by Hazel. I know its a lot sketchier than even the ones you said was sketchy, but I was trying to practice and everything... I hope you like it!
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#9 Post by TheKiwi »

Hey everyone! Thanks to everyone who looks at my art or comments. I'll get some more of the requests done!
I ended up doodling a character I made in Fantasy Life.
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#10 Post by linka08 »

Hi TheKiwi, I like your arts! The color you chose is nice
But I think it will be better if you clean the lineart and the base color :D

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#11 Post by Hazel-Bun »

Oh so sweet! I'll feature it in the thread if that okay with you?
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#12 Post by TheKiwi »

Thanks Linka! I do have to work on my cleanup skills in general. But I also find just sketching a scene out fun too.

And @Hazelbun, of course! I don't have any problem with that.

Here's a promo image I did for a VN I'm working on. I'll be posting in the WiP page soon but I want to have more to show before then.
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#13 Post by TheKiwi »

It's been a tough week...
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And here's a character from Mica: Apoptosis!
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Mica: Apoptosis

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#14 Post by Coren »

Thank you so much for drawing Mika!! The overall mood of the drawing is really nice!

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#15 Post by TheKiwi »

Background practice, UI practice and a stupid little doodle (Edited an old sprite a bit so the colors would match! I love when VNs have slight edits in the sprites depending on the bg). WHAT IS CONSISTENT ART.
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