Kiwi's Art Thread! [Critique and Requests!]

[TheKiwi]

Drew some fanart of Katawa Shoujo!

[TheKiwi]

Hi! Here's some more pictures I've sketched lately.

recruitment sketch

[TheKiwi]

a gifto for a friendo! miki from katawa shoujo

[chocojax]

I really like how you did the shading here! Just wanted to point out a few things though:

* The shading on her belly (area around her bellybutton) looks strange. Rather than protruding outward, the shading makes it look like an indent.
* Boobs look too far apart? I think the shading makes the boob look like they have a sharp turn outwards at the bottom. (Maybe because they're big/hang a little, but I don't know that much about boobs hahah)

* Perspective: Excluding the background, it looks like the viewer is looking up from her knees. Excluding the character, it looks like the viewer's eyes are a significant height above the water. So, it'd look less strange if the water height level was below the picture (if you kept the water at her knee, then viewer would have to be underwater)

[TheKiwi]

Thank you for the critique, choco! You're absolutely right about the subject/background view!! I'll try and make my next pictures better and more cohesive. As for the rest, I'll keep that in mind for the next time!

[TheKiwi]

Concept art for different projects! The first is a recruitment sketch kind of deal, while the second is yuri game jam. We ended up going with the middle design!

[TheKiwi]

And here are the dweebs!

[sharikah]

Can I make a request of any characters from my game below~!!