Brambly Learns CG ~ Feedback please!

[Brambly]

So I'm trying to learn to draw game CG art. Most of this is new to me as I'm more of a sketch and colour in person. So any feedback would be most appreciated~

Shading is still incomplete and obviously I haven't started the background yet.

[ffocal]

Length of forehead is a bit...

[SundownKid]

The angle kind of bothers me, looking at it makes me queasy. I feel like the dutch angle should be used sparingly, in cases of tension. After all, it's meant to induce dizziness in the viewer. In this case, it doesn't seem like a shot that merits the use of the dutch angle and would be easier on the eyes if it was in a normal position.

Otherwise, I think the forehead isn't that bad, considering it's a very stylized super-anime sort of art style.

[truefaiterman]

As pointed out, the forehead seems a little too large, even for that style, and I agree that the angle seems extreme: I'd use it, to give some dynamism to the picture, but more mildly.

You said the shading isn't complete, but just in case, remember to have a defined lightsource, I can't find it. Also, take care with the hands, the character's fingers lack a joint, and are too spiky.

I like the composition and the design, though, and the colours are pretty well chosen.

[Brambly]

Thank you for all the input so far!

Angle: I didn't know that I'll keep that in mind next time. Bit too late to change the angle now.

Forehead: I've lowered the bangs a bit is this better for the long forehead?

Hands: I've redrawn the hands and made them less pointy... But maybe a bit too rounded this time?

[King-sama]

Hope this helps!

[Brambly]

Thank you King-Sama this helps alot!

Update~

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Since you've gotten help on the body, just a tip about the head - try to have the eyes look somewhere, like at the lollipop or a passerby or something, rather than stare at something the viewer doesn't know about..