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Need critiques -and help with prices :)

#1 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Tue Aug 04, 2015 10:30 pm

Well, my goal is to make (mainly) character designs and sprites. I'd like to read your opinion on my art, since I want it to look professional :) Please don't mind if lines looks messy for now ^^. Is it the hair coloring/painting ok for a standard VN style?

As for the prices, I've seen many examples but, I'm still pretty unsure. How much would you pay for a sprite like this but with a proper lineart? Not counting facial expressions and other stuff. Please be honest >.<
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#2 Post by Sights » Wed Aug 05, 2015 12:48 am

$25.

To improve, focus on the lines around the face and hair. You have the right designs, but they could be more 3 dimensional.
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#3 Post by pocari » Wed Aug 05, 2015 4:21 am

Your art is so pretty!
as for the price, I'm not sure but maybe around $20 for a whole body.
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#4 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Thu Aug 06, 2015 1:42 am

@Sights: I think I understand what you're saying, I'll take a deep look at lighting/shading. $25 I never thought that much, kinda made my day xD Thank you :)

@pocari: $20 sounds nice I think. I'm glad you like my art, thanks!
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#5 Post by Taleweaver » Thu Aug 06, 2015 2:02 am

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#6 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Thu Aug 06, 2015 2:39 am

Taleweaver wrote:Threads about a single artist's work go to Personal Art Threads.

Moved.
Ok, I'm really sorry! >.<
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#7 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Sat Aug 08, 2015 9:46 pm

I tried something more '3d' but, is it ok? I'm not sure if it's the right style for a visual novel. Is just a sketch, btw.
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#8 Post by fleet » Sun Aug 09, 2015 2:36 pm

" I'm not sure if it's the right style for a visual novel."

There is no 'wrong' style. Some people will like the artwork, some won't.
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#9 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Sun Aug 09, 2015 3:37 pm

fleet wrote:" I'm not sure if it's the right style for a visual novel."

There is no 'wrong' style. Some people will like the artwork, some won't.
You're right, I'm just overthinking. Thanks :)
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#10 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Sat Aug 15, 2015 1:57 pm

Tried to make a sprite's sample, any opinion is more than welcomed.
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#11 Post by RayDizzle » Sat Aug 29, 2015 4:52 pm

I'm amazed. I don't think you should be so self-conscious on your art. I love it and think it's great! :)
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#12 Post by SundownKid » Sat Aug 29, 2015 7:02 pm

They look pretty good, although there is still some room for improvement. You may want to ask for a redline from a more experienced artist to work out any flaws.
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#13 Post by chaotiqueparadis » Sun Aug 30, 2015 12:21 am

RayDizzle wrote:I'm amazed. I don't think you should be so self-conscious on your art. I love it and think it's great! :)
Thank you very much :D
SundownKid wrote:They look pretty good, although there is still some room for improvement. You may want to ask for a redline from a more experienced artist to work out any flaws.
Thank you,I'll try with that :)
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